Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Naruto characters


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The list was promoted by User:The Rambling Man 17:31, 2 August 2008.

List of Naruto characters
The result of months of merging and whatnot. Here is WP:ANIME's first prospective FL character list. Cheers, Sephiroth BCR  ( Converse ) 18:20, 22 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments


 * "who can utilize" &rarr; "who can use"
 * logical quotation issues such as ""cool genius,"" &rarr; ""cool genius"," and ""the archetypal rival character."" &rarr; ""the archetypal rival character"." per WP:PUNC, where the punctuations only belong in the quotes if it should logically belong there, such as if it's a full sentence and could use a period

Gary King ( talk ) 18:58, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Both fixed. Sephiroth BCR  ( Converse ) 02:04, 23 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * "This is a list of characters ..." start with something more interesting like "The Naruto anime and manga series feature a number of ..." perhaps?
 * "two and a half" I fancy this should be hyphenated?
 * "progress as ninja in skill and character." reads awkwardly to me.
 * "ninja of Konohagakure " not really necessary to repeat where he's from since that point was made in the previous paragraph. Especially as you have Konohagakure again at the end of this sentence.
 * as a base for " as a basis?
 * the actual manga " is actual required here?
 * "he utilizes occasionally changes.[10] For instance, he utilized " can we change one of the utilized to, say, used, for some variety?
 * "After an encounter with his brother in Part I, Sasuke is beaten physically and mentally" wasn't he beaten in the encounter? Or perhaps you could say Sasuke is left beaten...
 * "After an incident " - probably needs a little expanding.
 * "double team opponents " double-team?
 * "traveling with his arms and legs " I know what you mean but this reads oddly - we all travel with our arms and legs!
 * "things actual dogs " never sure of the need for actual here.
 * "twenty-three and twenty-four" 23 and 24.
 * Just be careful about overlinking. Naruto Uzumaki, for instance, is linked in four consecutive sections...
 * Shame that Ikuko Tani doesn't have an article - the only red link!
 * Page ranges in the references should use the en-dash, not the hyphen to separate them.
 * Otherwise, a really really good piece of work. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:13, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Think I got everything. sephiroth bcr  ( converse ) 22:04, 1 August 2008 (UTC)

This looks good. I think Gary and TRM have found everything, so I have nothing to do but support. Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 17:16, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
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