Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Nunavut general elections/archive2


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by Dabomb87 00:45, 13 June 2010.

List of Nunavut general elections

 * Nominator: Tom pw (talk) (review) 18:13, 22 May 2010 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because I believ it meets all the criteria, with good prose, a suitable lead, a comprehensive covering of all items within the defined scope, a simple structure and style, and is stable. This list will need to be updfated every few years as new elections occur, but otherwise the list is stable. Tom pw (talk) (review) 18:13, 22 May 2010 (UTC)


 * Comment "This article provides a summary of..." Featured lists no longer begin like this; please see recently promoted FLs for examples of more engaging intros. Dabomb87 (talk) 19:32, 22 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I've chnaged the opening sentence now. Tom pw (talk) (review) 16:52, 23 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks, looks much better. Dabomb87 (talk) 20:27, 23 May 2010 (UTC)

The Rambling Man (talk) 08:21, 1 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Refs 9, 10 and 12 need an en-dash, not a hyphen.
 * Not convinced that the districts need to be bold. The List of Alberta general elections is actually in pretty poor shape and could use bringing up to our current standards.
 * Comment There is one dead link; please check the toolbox. Dabomb87 (talk) 14:32, 31 May 2010 (UTC)

Comments  Jujutacular  T · C 17:56, 8 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Ref 1: Who publishes this guide? Is it this? Link to it if that's correct.
 * "There have been nineteen ridings for all elections to date, each electing one Member of the Legislative Assembly (MLA)." Change riding to link to Electoral district (Canada). Also, reword this sentence. Even after finding out what a riding is, it was difficult to understand this sentence.


 * Comment: Footnote D is an incomplete sentence. Ucucha 18:40, 11 June 2010 (UTC)

Comments –
 * The lead is relatively short compared to those of most FLs that have come through here lately. Is there a possibility for any more prose?
 * I believe this has been mentioned before, but reference 1 needs a publisher. Don't think the publisher needs an external link, though.
 * Spell out CBC in the references and note H.  Giants2008  ( 27 and counting ) 20:15, 11 June 2010 (UTC)


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