Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Phoenix Suns head coaches


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:The Rambling Man 06:50, 4 August 2008.

List of Phoenix Suns head coaches
I am nominating this article for featured list status because I believe it is featured list criteria. Annoyomous 24  08:05, 23 July 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * "most amount of regular-season and playoff games." – "most regular season and playoff games."
 * "by a Basketball Hall of Famer. " &rarr; "by a Basketball Hall of Fame inductee. "
 * DONE ALL! K. Annoyomous  24  22:26, 23 July 2008 (UTC)

Gary King ( talk ) 09:04, 23 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * First sentence of lead is dull and needs to flow a bit with the next one. Start by explaining what the Phoenix Suns is and then say they've had 12 head coaches in their franchise history.
 * In general I would expand the lead a bit more.
 * You need a note to explain why second stints have a dash in the # column.
 * "Awards Won" can be "Awards won"
 * en-dash should separate the years in the link to the 07/08 season.
 * MacLeod and Johnson link to disambiguation pages.
 * DONE ALL! K. Annoyomous  24  22:26, 23 July 2008 (UTC)


 * The Rambling Man (talk) 12:42, 23 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Support Looks good — Chris!  c t 18:40, 27 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Support Everything looks good NapHit (talk) 19:12, 3 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 07:02, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
 * "The Suns are an American professional basketball team" -- Give the team's full name on first use
 * Could say in the Lede that D'Antoni left at the end of the season, or that Terry Porter is yet to coach the team in a game.
 * Image caption needs a full stop
 * The sentence starting "Founded in 1968,..." is a bit too long and clunky. Can it be made less wordy and/or shorter/split into two?
 * DONE ALL! -- K. Annoyomous  24  GO LAKERS! 07:12, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I can support this one too, now. Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 06:34, 4 August 2008 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.