Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Popotan episodes


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Matthewedwards 02:04, 10 March 2009.

List of Popotan episodes

 * Nominator(s): じん  ない  

I believe the last of any signifigant issues have now been resolved. じん ない  20:10, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

Comments from  I trust did a good job copyediting, so I won't even look at the episode list for errors I won't find. Good job on the list overall. And why yes, I stole this comment layout from. I quite like it. ɳ OCTURNE ɳ OIR ( t &bull; c ) 01:14, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * "The DVD box cover of the Popotan anime." from the caption, is not a sentence.
 * Corrected. Combined the 2 sentances. じん  ない  03:22, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * "The anime, which features character designs by Haruka Sakurai based on the original concept by Akio Watanabe[2][3] under the alias of Poyoyon Rock,[4][5] was developed by Shaft, directed and storyboarded by Shinichiro Kimura, and written by Jukki Hanada." is very convoluted. Try splitting it up into multiple sentences.
 * Done. Semi-colon split the character designs (which was probably the section that made it so convoluted). じん  ない  03:22, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * "They originally aired on TBS's satellite station BS-i from July 17, 2003 through October 2, 2003" needs a comma before and after BS-i.
 * Done. じん  ない  03:22, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * "From August 15, 2003 through August 17, 2003 the first episode of Popotan, "Secret House", was shown for free at Ishimaru Electronics in Japan." needs a comma after the second 2003 and personally, I would use "to" instead of "through" or just exchange the whole intro for "Between August 15 and August 17, 2003,".
 * Done. じん  ない  03:22, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * "At the same time Bandai released DVDs without the figurines at a lower cost." Needs a comma after "time".
 * Done. じん  ない  03:22, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * "The discs also came with a promotional figurine of one of the girls." I assume you mean "Each disc also came with..."?
 * Yes. I changed it to that. じん  ない  03:22, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * "[11]Geneon USA licensed needs a space between the ref and the next sentence.
 * Done. じん  ない  03:22, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * How come only the opening theme is mentioned and not the closing theme? More detail could be given here, including the name of the artist.
 * I added all information on the any release based directly on the anime's songs. じん  ない  03:22, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * EP# should be bolded. Other lists tend to just use # as well, so you may want to consider that. I personally don't care either way.
 * Done...i believe. じん  ない  03:27, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Do "mansion" and "ghosts" really need to be wikilinked? Same with most of the other wikilinks in the episodes; I'd assume most readers know what "Christmas" is.
 * I removed ghosts as it's not that pertinent to the story. Christmas, or rather the idea of Christmas, plays a somewhat more important role in the anime and while most people might be familiar with it, it is also relevant to the topic, especially as it relates to 1 episode in particular.
 * Mansion...well...i could remove that one. While it is a central location not knowing about it would not inpede one's reading of the list as much as Christmas would. じん  ない  03:22, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * On that note, can you wikilink to List of Popotan characters more often? I have never seen this series, so I had no clue who the characters are.
 * I added links to characters mentioned not at the top. That should be enough links to that page. じん  ない  03:22, 3 March 2009 (UTC)

Wow, I really dislike the formatting of some of the citation templates... Anyway, I did a minor c/e and tweaking, so I will support. ɳ OCTURNE ɳ OIR ( t &bull; c ) 04:21, 3 March 2009 (UTC)

Comment: instead of using multiple sources for the Japanese epsiode titles, I believe it would be better to use a single source (perhaps http://www.b-ch.com/cgi-bin/contents/ttl/stry_list.cgi?ttl_c=601) as a general reference, as many other animanga FLs do. —tan³ tx 10:05, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Another comment: per WP:MOS-JA, "S・U・K・I" is styled inappropriately, and should probably be "Suki". —tan³ tx 10:11, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Did this myself. —tan³ tx 03:57, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
 * Done...took me a while to figure out what was the actual "title" and was was the "work" it was published under. じん  ない  10:19, 3 March 2009 (UTC)
 * No other problems I can see. Support.  —tan³ tx 03:57, 9 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Support. I fixed any remaining issues I found myself. I wish to congratulate Jinnai for persisting with this, through 3 FLCs and my many opposes/comments. Rambo's Revenge (talk)  17:03, 8 March 2009 (UTC)

Support My concerns were resolved in previous FLCs.

Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 02:14, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
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