Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of The Bellflower Bunnies episodes/archive1


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The list was not promoted 16:14, 8 May 2008.

List of The Bellflower Bunnies episodes
Well, I hope this gives us the triple crown...
 * Peer review

Sorry if I haven't been online that much this past week...owing much to trips to New York, Danbury and my library, not to mention a lot of maintenance on the new Wikia I've set up about this franchise. But can you tell me what more needs to be done? --Slgrandson (How's my egg-throwing coleslaw?) 02:16, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
 * Oppose by Dweller

Many varied problems, esp. with language/translation/lack of translation/inconsistencies... ...I stopped there. Needs a rethink and definitely a copyedit. I suspect some of the problems have been caused by translation from French (I could be wrong) but a copyeditor can smooth these over. --Dweller (talk) 15:07, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
 * "Since its premiere, TF1 has always been involved in the show's production" - awkward subject/object switching, could be simplified.
 * "Moran Caouissin directed the first four episodes, before his role went to Eric Berthier for the rest of its run." its run? Subject is the director's role
 * I don't know what this means: "The Bellflower Bunnies has aired on the TF! Jeunesse/TFOU block on its original station" What does "block" mean in this context? Is TF! a typo?
 * Wikilink first uses of Germany and German, as well as North America, Netherlands, South Korea and, erm, Quebec (which seems not be located in any country)
 * Ditto for Region 1 DVDs - in the image caption too for region 2
 * "As of May 2008, only twelve of these episodes have been released in six separate volumes." What does this mean? Which episodes? What's a "volume"?
 * "Original specials" what's so special about them?
 * Moran Caouissin is definitely not "an animator from DuckTales the Movie: Treasure of the Lost Lamp;" unless he's a fictional character, which I doubt
 * "Based on" isn't a very explanatory heading. I had to work out what was intended, which isn't ideal for featured material
 * Presumably "Air date" refers to the date of the first airing of the episode?
 * Your episode summaries should be labelled as such
 * Why are there spaces before the !s in the "based on" titles? Why is only the first of them wikilinked?
 * The FL criteria mention "images" (plural). Perhaps I'm pedantic, but I'd expect more than one in a FL.
 * Why does "Based on" disappear for Season 2?
 * Why no wikilinking in plot summaries?
 * Why is "Dandelion's Vanishing Vegetable Garden" translated, but other titles are not?
 * "But his submission, a water cycle, eventually gives him a lot of pressure from the villagers." I think "gives" is the wrong word
 * "Poppy goes for some cabbage from a distant greenhouse." What do you mean by "goes for"?
 * What does "Mistletoe soon takes the favour. " mean?
 * What's a "hare girl"?
 * "Mistletoe practises his father Bramble's beekeeping job" Maybe beekeeping is extremely prestigious in France, but in England while one might practise law or medicine, I don't think you'd use the verb for beekeeping
 * "during the young Bellflowers' attraction" I think "attraction" is the wrong word
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