Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of The Bellflower Bunnies episodes/archive2


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by User:Matthewedwards 02:57, 20 October 2008.

List of The Bellflower Bunnies episodes
previous FLC (16:14, 8 May 2008)


 * Previous peer reviews: 1st (March/April), 2nd (May/June), 3rd (September/October)

In the words of Violette Bellflower/Pirouette Passiflore:

Rule #4 of good writing: It takes a lot of rewriting and rethinking.

And, after long weeks and months of figuring it out, here I am, about to start what could possibly be my first (and maybe only) featured or good topic. I'm 96% sure that everything has been addressed from the PRs and last FLC.

To borrow a little something from Reginald Lewis: "Why should Simpsons freaks and anime geeks have all the fun?" Well, I'm finally about to take you all on.

Now, give me a triple crown... --Slgrandson (How's my egg-throwing coleslaw?) 14:31, 6 October 2008 (UTC)

Comments - sources look good, links checked out with the link checker tool. Note I was not able to evaluate the non-English sources. Ealdgyth - Talk 13:17, 7 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Comments


 * Especially in the case of season 2, the order of the broadcast episodes differs drastically from the official sequence provided by Institut National de l'Audiovisuel (INA) and AnimezVous.com. - Why not just say The order of the broadcast episodes for season 2 differ from the official sequence provided by Instit National de I'Audiovisuel (INA) and NimezVous.com. (It gets rid of "especially" and "drastically" as those are in a way WP:POV.
 * Not that it is against policy, but IMO is against Cr 1 + 5: the style of how the dates are written are different throughout, they should all be consistent. (I.G. 2002 December and December 2002)
 * So there was no English title for episode #8? If not, can a note be given as to why?
 * Why doesn't season three have the source for material column, just curious.-- S R X  13:09, 9 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Comments from
 * Merge some of the paragraphs in the lead; too many small ones.
 * "Series overview" – "Overview"
 * "Only in Germany have titles been given for all 52 episodes" – "Have titles been given for all 52 episodes in Germany only" – please try to keep sentences passive when possible.
 * "Especially in the case of season 2, the order of the broadcast episodes differs drastically from the official sequence provided by Institut National de l'Audiovisuel (INA) and AnimezVous.com." – convert into active voice
 * "Series overview" – the paragraphs can be merged together (in a logical manner) also

Gary King ( talk ) 21:54, 9 October 2008 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.