Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of World Heritage Sites in Argentina/archive1

List of World Heritage Sites in Argentina

 * Nominator(s): Tone 07:36, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

Argentina has 12 WHS, including the Inca roads, Iguazú falls, and old Jesuit missions. Standard style. As the list for Sudan is already seeing support, I am adding a new nomination. Tone 07:36, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

 * MPGuy2824
 * wikilink "calves".
 * "The missions have different layouts and are in different states of conservation," End the sentence here.
 * "around the spectacular Iguazu Falls" - Use a number (length/height/other) instead of "spectacular".
 * "On the Brazilian side".
 * "created by the hunter-gatherer communities." Remove "the".
 * "In additional to" -> "In addition to"
 * "The oldest art in the cave dates to the 10th millennium BP, while the youngest traces of inhabitants at the site were dated to around 700 CE." Since you are using an actual date in the end, I would suggest that the "10th millenium BP" be converted to "8th millenium BCE".
 * "It is a breeding ground for the southern right whale and the conservation efforts have helped the recovery of the once widely-hunted species"
 * "valley by the hunter-gatherer communities and early farmers," - Remove "the"
 * "as movement s of messengers,"
 * "Clandestine Centre of Detention, Torture, and Extermination." - no need to capitalize any of those since it isn't part of the name.
 * "and then by communities that engaged in agriculture"
 * "of a 100 million year s old"
 * That's all that i got. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 10:28, 19 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Fixed all, thanks! Tone 12:05, 19 July 2024 (UTC)
 * "served as the clandestine" to "served as a clandestine" - unless you are sure that there was only one.
 * Support in advance, since the above is a minor point which I'm sure you'll fix. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 14:26, 19 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Fixed that as well. Thanks! Tone 14:40, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments

 * "at the 5th session of World Heritage Committee" => "at the 5th session of the World Heritage Committee"
 * "and the works of Le Corbusier with six coutries" - last word is spelt incorrectly
 * That's it :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:20, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Fixed, that was easy :) Tone 23:02, 20 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:18, 21 July 2024 (UTC)