Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of awards and nominations received by 30 Seconds to Mars/archive1


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The list was not promoted by Matthewedwards 08:08, 18 July 2009.

List of awards and nominations received by 30 Seconds to Mars

 * Nominator(s): Matthew Riva (talk) 09:45, 4 July 2009 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because it is a great page and I think that it could be on featured list. Matthew Riva (talk) 09:45, 4 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Oppose from
 * General
 * Dabs check out fine
 * There is one dead external link.
 * All punctuation should come before the references not after it.
 * Lead
 * "A Beautiful Lie", the fourth single from the second album, was nominated for "Best Video" at the Kerrang! Awards and wins for "Video Star" at the MTV Asia Awards[1], "Playlist Generation" at the TRL Awards[2]and at the MTV Europe Music Awards[3], and it received the "MTV Gold Video Plays Award" from MTV International[4][5]. -- 1)and wins for--what does this mean? Are you trying to say and won? 2)There should be a space between ref 2 and the word and
 * 30 Seconds to Mars' songs and albums have received recognition at the Kerrang! Awards, the MTV Europe Music Awards, the MTV Australia Awards, the MTV Video Music Awards, the Fuse Awards and other many. -- 1)Overlink of Kerrang! Awards and MTV Europe Music Awards 2)Its not proper to state the MTV awards as the [so and so awards], remove all the the's, plus the one the at the beginning covers the rest. 3)other many -> many others.
 * I would word that their single "The Kill" is one of their most successful ones, as it garnered a lot of recognition.
 * Be consistent, use either from the or at the when referring to the awarding body.
 * The lead should state the overall number of awards.
 * There is a lot of overlinking, go through the prose and unlink articles that have already been linked once.
 * List
 * It proposes the 30 Seconds to Mars among the best rock artists.  -- HuH?
 * The Fuse Fangoria Chainsaw awards should state why they are given.
 * They wins for "Fuse Best of 2007"  -- Is they wins a English variant? In addition, this should be consistent with the other wording as in "they won so and so out of so and so nominations.
 * The Hollywood Life's Breakthrough of the Year Awards they recognizes the most beloved people of Hollywood. In 2006 Jared Leto wins for "Crossover Artist" [4]. 1)Remove the they 2)Comm after 2006
 * I'm not gonna review each section, but at a glance the list needs a lot of work. Each section prose should have an explanation as to why the awards are given. The following sentence should state how many awards they have won from their amount of nominations. See WP:FL for FL examples.
 * Poll
 * Why is this section called Poll?
 * References
 * Link all publishers that have articles, such as KROQ
 * Ref 16 is lacking a publisher.
 * There is an inconsistency with the date formatting, use one date format.-- T ru  c o   503 03:08, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
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