Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of birds of Leicestershire and Rutland/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by The Rambling Man 15:02, 18 June 2010.

List of birds of Leicestershire and Rutland

 * Nominator(s):  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  06:11, 31 May 2010 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because I feel that it meets all the criteria, and is ready for scrutiny  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  06:11, 31 May 2010 (UTC)


 * I have started to add comments, but I am not the main reviewer. Snowman (talk) 14:24, 31 May 2010 (UTC)


 * It would be better if the photographs were of birds actually in Leicestershire or Rutland. Snowman (talk) 10:44, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * That's not realistic. Unless I've made a mistake, all the images are of the subspecies that occur in Leicestershire or Rutland, so there is no inaccuracy in terms of what is shown.  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  14:04, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * The captions do not indicate where the bird photographs are from, and I think that it makes the article bizarre to have photographs of birds from elsewhere. I feel cheated to find out from the image description on commons that the Mallard is actually in Germany. Have you tried looking for photographs of local birds? I guess that there would be enough local wild bird photographs available. Snowman (talk) 14:23, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I have just checked flickr and found photographs of Mallards in Rutland within two minutes, so I find it inexcusable to use a photograph taken in Germany of this common bird. The Robin illustration is a photograph in Ireland and so it is not a local Robin, and I find this abysmal also. I think that all of the current images should be removed and then the page can be re-illustrated with local bird photographs only. Snowman (talk) 14:58, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * When some relevant photographs are displayed the alt text can be added. Snowman (talk) 18:35, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I didn't think that alt text was still a requirement, but no big deal anyway  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  11:22, 1 June 2010 (UTC)
 * I have not looked at the rules for a while, so I expect you are right about the new rules. Snowman (talk) 11:35, 1 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Some of the photographs are of unknown or unclear location. Snowman (talk) 14:26, 2 June 2010 (UTC)
 * But the photos of the birds are clear, aren't they? Isn't that the point of these images?  To illustrate the subject, i.e. the bird?  The Rambling Man (talk) 14:29, 2 June 2010 (UTC)
 * I note that bird images from outside Europe have been replaced (one from New York and one from India). Snowman (talk) 15:42, 3 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Yes, although the New York one was OK as to ssp, there was bound to be a european pic, Indian was wrong ssp as detailed below  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  15:50, 3 June 2010 (UTC)


 * I think that the format could be improved. Lines starting with the common name followed by a comma, then the binomial name in italics, then preceding to comments without any punctuation are not easy to scan. Snowman (talk) 10:51, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I could put a full stop after the binomials, or did you have something better in mind?  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  14:04, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * That might be a quick fix. Or a hyphen, as you have already put a hyphen towards the beginning of the lines. Why not see what this looks like? Tables would take a long time to write. Snowman (talk) 14:23, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I'll probably do a table, a bit of find/replace and it doesn't take too long. Give me a day or two to sort this  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  16:07, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for completing table  Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  11:22, 1 June 2010 (UTC)


 * What about mentioning birds at Tropical Birdland, Leicestershire and birds in other zoos in this locality? Snowman (talk) 10:54, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * "List of birds of..." articles always deal with apparently wild birds. I suppose bird zoos could be in a "see also", but I don't think they fit there personally <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  14:04, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * You are talking about a file name "List of wild birds of xyz". On commons people (not me) are starting to add zoo categories as subcategories of birds by country categories. The file name here is "List of birds of xyz", and this intuitively includes captive birds as well. Snowman (talk) 14:23, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * This isn't commons, and I don't think it is intuitive that parrots and eagles would be expected in a list for a British county. It's inconsistent to object to images of birds found in the county but photographed elsewhere, but to push for the inclusion of zoos. What existing featured list of this type includes zoos? <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  16:07, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Probably enough to list the zoos, rather than all the species in the zoos. There is nothing wrong with starting a new trend of listing zoos. This is not a list of wild birds it is a list of birds, and it would be logical to subdivide the page into wild birds and captive birds. "If you always do what you always did, you will always get what you always got." Snowman (talk) 17:24, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * But I've specifically excluded escapes and captive birds, as does the official British list <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  11:22, 1 June 2010 (UTC)


 * The Snow Goose is a feral or captive released bird. It does not sound to me like this is living in the wild naturally as the introduction would indicate. Snowman (talk) 14:23, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Correct, removed <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  16:30, 31 May 2010 (UTC)


 * Red Kite - I guess that this bird was native here and then re-introduced somewhere near by. I am aware of Red-Kites being re-introduced in Oxfordshire (and perhaps some other places) and spreading out from there. Saying that it is introduced tends to imply that it never lived here before. Where Red Kites actually introduced here (as the article implies) or did they spread form successful re-introductions elsewhere? Snowman (talk) 14:36, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Clarified that they have spread from Northants reintroduction. <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?


 * The list includes birds that no longer live in the locality - what it the time span here? Presumably these are not birds of this locality. Snowman (talk) 14:41, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm not quite sure what you mean, but I've added dates of last breeding where it's more than 25 years ago. I follow LROS in treating birds which last bred more recently as occasional breeders rather than ex-breeders <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  16:07, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Why should a bird be on the list if it has not been seen in the area for 150 years? Why not have a bird that has not been seen in the area for 1000 years? Snowman (talk) 17:26, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * I see what you mean. Usually 1500 AD is taken as the cut off date for recent extinction, but obviously you need reliable evidence to get back to that date. It's possible that LROS and Fray et al have missed something, but I don't know of anything. <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  06:07, 1 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Was there a very large owl that disappeared in the UK? Snowman (talk) 20:27, 1 June 2010 (UTC)
 * It's often claimed that the Eagle Owl once bred in the UK, but there is no proof, and it's not on the BOU official list (unlike the Great Auk). It may have occurred in the very distant past, but that's way beyond the 1500 AD mark, and regional bird lists don't include prehistoric fossils. Recent occurences have been claimed as natural recolonisation, but are often proved to be escapes (this is a very sedentary species, reluctant to cross water). The Snowy Owl is a rare visitor which has sometimes bred in the far north. Neither is on the Leicestershire and Rutland list. <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  06:30, 2 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Where are the references for the introduction and/or re-introduction programs? Snowman (talk) 14:48, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * The main source covers those, added pages as refs <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  16:30, 31 May 2010 (UTC)


 * The section headings should be converted to common names for the bird orders. As part of the wiki the format of this list should be consistent with other regional bird lists. Snowman (talk) 15:23, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Will do soon, probably when doing table <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  16:07, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Done <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  11:22, 1 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Osprey. I recall that the current Rutland birds were specially raised from the Scottish population after being reared from chicks. Would this be an introduction or a re-introduction?  I thought that the Osprey was once a bird throughout England and Scotland, then there were no birds in the UK, and then some migrated back to Scotland of their own accord.  Snowman (talk) 17:46, 31 May 2010 (UTC)
 * It was a natural recolonisation of Scotland. Fray says there is no evidence that the species that the species ever bred in Leicestershire, so it's an introduction. Although it's possible that the species bred in the distant past, there is no known evidence for this. The first avifauna for the counties gave passage records back to 1840, but no mention of them ever having bred. If you take away the Victorian and later man-made reservoirs, the counties have no sizeable natural lakes to attract the species. <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak  - </b> talk to me?  06:00, 1 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Is TOC box too long? Snowman (talk) 20:18, 1 June 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't know if there are any guidelines. I'm quite happy for you to add a NOTOC if you think that's better <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  06:30, 2 June 2010 (UTC)
 * The TOC box looks too long to me, but it can not be removed without being replaced with something. I have seen long TOC boxes discussed in FAs and shortened. What about using a custom made index section, as can be seen in other bird lists? Snowman (talk) 08:12, 2 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Done <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  10:33, 2 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Fine. Snowman (talk) 11:18, 2 June 2010 (UTC)


 * The file is still an orphan until it has more than three pages link to here. Snowman (talk) 11:18, 2 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Ruff image: The caption reads "Displaying male Ruff". According to the table the Ruff does not breed in this locality, so the a bird would never display like this in Leicestershire or Rutland. I think this image from an unspecified location is actively misleading. Snowman (talk) 08:46, 3 June 2010 (UTC)
 * No, spring passage birds are usually in breeding plumage and will display before moving on to breed elsewhere. There are no subspecies of Ruff, so no problem with appearance <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  15:10, 3 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Having said that, it's a rare occurence, changed for Black-tailed Godwit <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  15:18, 3 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Common Tern image: The bird is taking a fish back to the nest for the young in New York, USA. This seems an illogical choice for a photograph on this page, because the bird is a rare breeder at this location and this scene would be exceedingly rare at this location. Snowman (talk) 09:28, 3 June 2010 (UTC)
 * You have misread the table, it's uncommon, not rare. Up to 70 pairs breed annually, and passage flocks of similar size have recorded away from the breeding lakes. I expect to see this plumage in the county in spring. US subspecies is the same as W. Europe, I've nevertheless changed the image for one of an Arctic Tern from Europe.<b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak  - </b> talk to me?


 * Little Ringed Plover image: The bird is in breeding plumage in India. This seems an illogical choice for a photograph on this page, because this plumage phase would be rarely seen at this location. Snowman (talk) 09:28, 3 June 2010 (UTC)
 * It's bred in the counties regularly for at least 50 years, up to 30 recorded pairs, not bad for an inland wader, and like Common Tern, it's always possible to see this plumage in spring. However, the Indian bird might be jerdoni, which although identical as far as I can is not correct, so changed for a Lapwing pic. No ssp and an abundant bird. <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  15:10, 3 June 2010 (UTC)


 * "waterbirds" - does this have a strict definition? If wikilinked, it would redirect to "ducks, geese and swans", so can it be replaced with ducks, geese and swans? or is it intended to have a wider meaning that this? Snowman (talk) 12:14, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
 * It would also include, for example, grebes and coots, just birds that use the water <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  12:26, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
 * And also the Osprey. I have changed it to "aquatic birds". I expect there is a better wording. Snowman (talk) 12:58, 4 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Should the "Rose-ringed Parakeet" be on the list? Snowman (talk) 12:40, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Fray et al says all records are probably local escapes, not birds from the established feral populations further south in England, so it's not on the county list.
 * Fine. That is a 2009 reference, so it is up-to-date. Snowman (talk) 15:55, 4 June 2010 (UTC)


 * "There are nine introduced species with that maintain themselves without necessary recourse to further introduction." - there are many ways of supporting introduced populations and further introductions is one of them. I presume that this is meant to imply that the populations thrive totally independently. Snowman (talk) 13:04, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Yes, that's the wording used in the county list. Although it's more verbose than "self-supporting feral population", it does spell out that a species that relies on further introduction doesn't count. Chukars were frequently released, but died out when that became illegal, so they aren't on the list, unlike Red-legged Partridge which is assumed to be self-sustaining. <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  15:29, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
 * So these nine species need no further introductions and no active supportive measures. Snowman (talk) 15:55, 4 June 2010 (UTC)
 * That's correct. Pheasant and Red-leg undoubtedly get further introductions, but both are are clearly viable without these. The others, like Little Owl have no support at all, and the Ruddy Duck survives despite active culling. Obviously over longer time scales things might change (it looks as if lady Amherst's Pheasant is virtually extinct in the UK), but no sign of any change at present <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  18:37, 4 June 2010 (UTC)


 * I think that there should be a notice or note to state that not all of the illustrations are photographed within the locality. Snowman (talk) 15:55, 11 June 2010 (UTC)
 * To the end of the introduction I have added; "Photographs of birds illustrating the list are not all taken within the locality." Is that fair enough? Snowman (talk) 17:30, 17 June 2010 (UTC)

Provisional impression. I edit bird pages and I have tried to be objective to reduce any conflict of interest in commenting on this bird article. The list has shaped up, but I think that not mentioning on the page that bird photographs shown on this page are not all from the locality is a major flaw. Snowman (talk) 20:29, 14 June 2010 (UTC)

Support. I think that the list looks good and that it has reached FL standard. Nevertheless, perhaps keen copy editors may have more to say. Snowman (talk) 21:22, 17 June 2010 (UTC)

Support Sandman888 (talk) 10:42, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
 * A fine list. Must say I havn't read above text thoroughly, if there are any concerns (besides nationality of photos), please notify me.
 * I guess that it would be better that you check this review yourself than rely on notifications for feedback. Sometimes it is better to sign after each comment, because sometimes a line can become detached from one signature made after several lines. I think that currently, it is actually quite difficult to trace who to notify. Snowman (talk) 16:33, 17 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Cd the TOC be on the left somehow? I'm not that happy with the layout. Perhaps two rows of bird-names under each heading in the traditional TOC format cd do?
 * This is the standard TOC for bird FLs (see List of_birds of Thailand). I'm not totally sure what your second sentence means, but if it means a normal default toc with two columns, it would be very long 9one reason the many regional bird lists use this style (I wouldn't know how to code it either) <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  12:10, 15 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Nice use of pictures, but isn't there pictures for all birds?
 * It's supposed to just illustrate the article, it would be very crowded if all species had images. The available images might not be the correct subspecies of have features that are improbable in L&R, such as open sea, beaches or cliffs, or show nesting birds of species that don't breed in the UK. If there is anywhere specific an image might be good, let me know and I'll add if possible. <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  12:10, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for review and support <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  12:10, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
 * What about these images from Rutland Water? Snowman (talk) 16:53, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
 * File:Podiceps cristatus -Rutland Water, Rutland, England-8.jpg Snowman (talk) 16:53, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
 * File:Cygnus olor -Rutland Water, Rutland, England-8.jpg Snowman (talk) 16:53, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
 * File:Phasianus colchicus -Rutland Water -female-8.jpg Snowman (talk) 16:53, 17 June 2010 (UTC)

Off-page comments of 15 June 2010 see: User talk:Jimfbleak (this wikilink will change with user talk page archiving). Snowman (talk) 11:02, 15 June 2010 (UTC)

Alternatively see this permalink under the Birds of Leics/Rutland section. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:51, 15 June 2010 (UTC)


 * What's to note from that discussion? Seems to be mainly bickering, why should other editors read that? Sandman888 (talk) 12:07, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree, but thought it better, if it was to be linked, to add a permalink. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:53, 16 June 2010 (UTC)

Support: fine lists, all comments addressed. Ucucha 05:55, 17 June 2010 (UTC) Comments—
 * ""BBRC" means that a full description of national rarities is required by the British Birds Rarities Committee. "LROS" indicates that a description of county rarities is required by the LROS Records Committee"—I think this means that when you see a bird marked with "BBRC", you have to report to the BBRC (and the same for the LROS committee), but it's not as clear as it should be.
 * rephrased and expanded to clarify (I hope)


 * Why are some of the common names used different from those used in the article?
 * The source used names like Cormorant and Coot because they are unambiguous in a L&R setting. I should have either stuck rigidly to the LROS list, or changed all to full versions, but ended up with a mix. All names should now be those of the article except where inappropriate (eg Goosander, since the article uses the US name)
 * I am not sure what should be done here; WP:BIRD suggests it may be better to use a regional list, but I have no preference one way or the other. You should probably indicate what list you are using for common names, though. Ucucha 15:45, 16 June 2010 (UTC)
 * names attributed to BOURC in lead now, and a few changed to fit including errors Wigeon and Reed Warbler <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  05:51, 17 June 2010 (UTC)


 * You call Fulica atra the "Coot" in the list and "Common Coot" in the figure caption.
 * fixed, Eurasian Coot for both


 * "eruption" seems an odd word to use (under "Sandgrouse")
 * It's standard for species like this that come flooding out of their normal range in an unpredictable way
 * You mean "irruption", right? &mdash;innotata 16:54, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Well spotted. Irruptive growth has a wiki page, and I think that some of the phrases used there can be used here to avoid puzzling jargon, if it has the meaning that was intended. Snowman (talk) 17:06, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Update: I have rephrased it, but it may need further enhancement. Snowman (talk) 17:15, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
 * An irruption is not well described as a temporary range expansion, nor does it have anything to do with irruptive growth. &mdash;innotata 19:04, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Please amend list. Snowman (talk) 22:57, 18 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Why does only Lagopus lagopus have the subspecies indicated in the table?
 * removed


 * Does the navigation template belong there when it doesn't link to this article?
 * added to template (Cornwall is there)

Ucucha 18:34, 15 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for reviewing again, all fixed now <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  06:52, 16 June 2010 (UTC)
 * thanks for pointing out the name problems, all fixed, thanks for support

Support nice list, well-illustrated. Good work Jimfbleak! The Rambling Man (talk) 12:33, 16 June 2010 (UTC)
 * thanks for your help and support <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  09:51, 17 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Support meaning not opposing the use of images from outside Leics and Rutland. The list is well illustrated and all the images seem appropriate. Other reviewers probably have noticed any flaws, and this appears to meet the featured list criteria. &mdash;innotata 16:58, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
 * I am not opposing it for showing birds from outside the locality. My point for discussion is that the page should say that not all of the birds are from the locality. In the absence of a specific reply to this issue, I have added an appropriate short notice to the list at the end of the introduction for clarity and transparency. Snowman (talk) 17:23, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Fair enough <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  19:09, 17 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Please note that I will be away for six days from tomorrow. There are no opposes or unresolved issues at present, if any arise, I'll deal with them when I get back. <b style="font-family:chiller; color:red;"> Jimfbleak - </b> talk to me?  05:56, 18 June 2010 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.