Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of international goals scored by Robin van Persie/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:31, 26 June 2018 (UTC).

List of international goals scored by Robin van Persie

 * Nominator(s): The Rambling Man (talk), TheSoccerBoy (talk) 20:19, 5 June 2018 (UTC)

Next in the list of national top scorers. Looking forward to receiving and dealing with any and all review comments. Cheers! The Rambling Man (talk) 20:19, 5 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Support Great work ! Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 09:39, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "He made his debut, coming on as a substitute for Ruud van Nistelrooy in a 2–0 victory over Romania in June 2005" - that comma looks a bit odd. I'd move everything after van Nistelrooy's name before the comma.


 * Reworded. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:39, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "the qualification campaign for the 2006 FIFA World Cup in Helsinki" - could be read as if the World Cup was in Helsinki.........


 * Reworded. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:39, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "he scored four goals in a 11–0 victory" => an 11-0 victory


 * Added "n".
 * "a 11–0 victory UEFA Euro 2012 qualifying match against San Marino" - think there's a word missing here somewhere


 * Indeed, but worse, we both failed to spot the repeat of "September 2011"...! Reworded.
 * "Twenty of his goals were scored in his home stadium, the Johan Cruyff Arena" - the reference to it being his home stadium reads a bit oddly. He's never played for Ajax, whose stadium it is, and it isn't the sole stadium used by the Dutch team, so it isn't really their "home stadium".  I'd be inclined to remove those words altogether.


 * Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:39, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Think that's it..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:30, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
 * thanks, I think I've got 'em all. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:39, 14 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Now happy to support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:43, 14 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Support--Lirim &#124; T 21:18, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

Source review passed; promoting. -- Pres N  15:36, 25 June 2018 (UTC)


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