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 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 26 November 2018 (UTC).

List of songs recorded by Talking Heads

 * Nominator(s): BeatlesLedTV (talk) 17:11, 15 October 2018 (UTC)

After taking a break from editing and FLC's for a while, I'm back. My return to FLC is another song list, this time by the rock band Talking Heads. I will also return to commenting on other FLCs like I used to earlier this year. As always, comments are appreciated and welcomed. Happy editing! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 17:11, 15 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Comments
 * "Talking Heads were an American new wave band" - I am not American but my understanding is that American English would say "Talking Heads was an American new wave band". This applies in a number of other places eg "their debut", so probably worth confirming with someone American :-)
 * That's how it's worded on their main page so I worded it the same here.
 * Fair enough :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:14, 16 October 2018 (UTC)
 * "12 of which weren't officially released" => "12 of which were not officially released" – Done
 * "live recordings of songs from their four albums (at the time)" => "live recordings of songs from their four albums to date" – Done
 * "only Top ten hit" - no need for capital T on Top – thought so
 * "a song that the English rock band of the same name named themselves after" => "a song from which the English rock band of the same name took its name" – Done
 * You haven't used the wording I suggested, and what you have put in doesn't make grammatical sense - you need to say "song from which", not "song that" -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:49, 18 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Sorry about that. All fixed :-) BeatlesLedTV (talk) 14:39, 18 October 2018 (UTC)


 * "The album marked a return the experimentation" - think the word "to" is missing – yes it is
 * "After Naked, the band went on a "hiatus"" - can't see why hiatus is in quote marks
 * It's in quotes because that's how it was perceived by the public. They really broke up in 1988 but didn't officially announce it until 1991, so to the public they were on "hiatus"
 * Then you need to clarify that with actual wording. Simply putting the word in quote marks doesn't convey that at all -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:37, 18 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Removed the quotes. I mainly used them because AllMusic & their main page puts the word in quotes as well. BeatlesLedTV (talk) 14:39, 18 October 2018 (UTC)

Hope this helps - ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:04, 16 October 2018 (UTC)
 * "12 previously unreleased songs have seen official release" => "12 previously unreleased songs have been officially released" (songs don't have eyes and therefore can't see anything) – Done
 * "Non-album single, B-side to "Psycho Killer"" - if it was the B-side then it wasn't a single, so change to "non-album song"
 * That's how I've had it for my other featured song lists so I think it's fine
 * ""Take Me to the River" - (Al Green) cover" - closing bracket is in the wrong place – yes it is
 * They released 22 singles as far as I can see. Was there really only one non-album song on all those B-sides?
 * The song "New Feeling" was originally a B-side but was later released on their debut later the same year. I have that fact in a note on the song. Yeah unlike the Smiths, Talking Heads never really had many non-album B-sides
 * Thanks for your comments! I'll be sure to check out your FLCs if I haven't already! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 15:12, 16 October 2018 (UTC)

The prose is great. This list has my support for FL promotion!-- N Ø  09:00, 17 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Support from MaranoFan
 * The only thing different I noticed about this list compared to other FLs of the same type is single releases being indicated separately. But its helpful to readers so no need to remove them.
 * Thank you so much! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 14:41, 17 October 2018 (UTC)
 * Support - all looks OK now -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:52, 18 October 2018 (UTC)

Comments by Dudley

 * "Beginning as former art school students" This sounds a bit clumsy to me. Maybe "After leaving art school"?
 * Fixed


 * "but suffered from David Byrne's "lyrical pretensions"" This is editorialising and should be attributed inline.
 * Yeah I never liked that because it seems biased and non-encyclopedic. I just removed it.


 * Looks fine. Just a couple of quibbles. Dudley Miles (talk) 19:13, 13 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much ! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 20:36, 13 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Support. Dudley Miles (talk) 22:49, 13 November 2018 (UTC)

Source review –
 * Ref 14 has a bit of all caps (TIME) that should be taken out. Otherwise, all of the references are well-formatted and the link-checker tool shows that the links are all in working order.
 * Given that Discogs is generally considered an unreliable source because it has user-generated content, we can do without the links in refs 3, 19, and 35. The liner notes themselves are perfectly fine sources, and it's not worth it to include an unreliable source even if they are just convenience links.
 * Spot-checks of refs 14 and 17 turned up no problems. Giants2008  ( Talk ) 23:17, 14 November 2018 (UTC)
 * All done. Thanks very much! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 04:01, 15 November 2018 (UTC)
 * With those comments resolved, I'd say this source review is a pass. Giants2008  ( Talk ) 22:20, 18 November 2018 (UTC)


 * "musical transition". What does Ruhlmann believe the band were transitioning from and to?
 * Basically Remain in Light built upon Fear of Music in its use of African polyrhythms and things like that. Ruhlmann just talks about how Fear of Music was basically the precursor to Remain in Light and showed what was yet to come. Make sense?
 * Yes, that makes sense. But, looking now at what the source says, Ruhlmann actually describes it as a "transitional album", rather than a "musical transition". A Thousand Doors (talk &#124; contribs) 18:28, 17 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Ruhlmann actually used "musical transition" in his review of Remain in Light so I added that ref to that sentence.
 * I still think it might be worth very briefly expanding on what he meant by "musical transition", though. So Fear of Music was the band's transition from their more straightforward first two albums, to the musical experimentation of Remain in Light? A Thousand Doors (talk &#124; contribs) 12:25, 19 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Affirmative :-) BeatlesLedTV (talk) 17:50, 19 November 2018 (UTC)
 * I still believe that this needs to be (briefly) explained in the article, then. "Musical transition" isn't really a common enough phrase that it can be just dropped into the lead without further clarification. A Thousand Doors (talk &#124; contribs) 21:28, 22 November 2018 (UTC)
 * I decided to remove the "musical transition" part and instead put "The style and sound of Fear of Music was expanded upon on their final Eno collaboration, Remain in Light (1980)". As Remain in Light built upon Fear of Music this is correct and I believe better explains the "transition". BeatlesLedTV (talk) 16:48, 23 November 2018 (UTC)

Giants2008 ( Talk ) 23:09, 25 November 2018 (UTC)
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