Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of tallest buildings in Spokane/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:27, 16 February 2022 (UTC).

List of tallest buildings in Spokane

 * Nominator(s): T85cr1ft19m1n (talk) 20:32, 13 December 2021 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because I think it meets the criteria and is of similar quality to other featured lists in this category. I believe this list provides a brief but good overview of high rise development in this midsize western city, is comprehensive, and provides relevant notes and hyperlinks for the buildings that would be of interest to the readers of the article. The article is well organized and visually looks good; people took the time to take decent photographs of the skyline and buildings to illustrate the article as well as to mapping the GPS coordinates of all the buildings in the list. Aside from the Albuquerque tallest buildings list, there are no other featured lists from midsized American cities and I hope to increase the representation in this category with this nomination. T85cr1ft19m1n (talk) 20:32, 13 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments by RunningTiger123
Hey @RunningTiger123, I know you’re pretty busy right now but the next time you have a moment could you check back with us to see if your concerns have been addressed? It’s been a while since we've heard from you. T85cr1ft19m1n (talk) 13:56, 2 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the delay – forgot about this over the holidays. Everything looks good, and I'm happy to support. RunningTiger123 (talk) 23:14, 2 January 2022 (UTC)

Drive-by comments

 * Names that start with "The" should sort based on the next word in the name
 * I deleted "The" from the building names


 * Some rows have references which are not in correct numerical order -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 22:43, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Fixed it. Thanks T85cr1ft19m1n (talk) 02:57, 15 December 2021 (UTC)

Further comments

 * "The Old National Bank Building was also the tallest building in the state upon completion" - is the "also" meant to indicate that it was also the tallest building in the city? If so, actually say that
 * Fixed! Clarified sentence in the Lead and the similar row note. Replaced Old National Bank Building with the modern name so people dont get confused.


 * Also, when was this?
 * Fixed! Added date.


 * Some buildings are wikilinked in the lead but others are not. Do the unlinked ones not have articles?  Surely they are notable?
 * Fixed! Added link to the Review Building article which I didnt know existed. I dont think there is one on the Bank of America building.


 * "and has held the tallest building in the city title for 40 years" - given that you already mentioned that it is the current tallest building and was built in 1981, these words are redundant
 * I see what you mean. I took out the redundant info but kept the age calculation. I think it is useful for readers to just tell people exactly how long ago that was so they can relax and not do math.


 * "This list ranks Spokane high rises that stand at least 145 feet (44 m) tall" - just out of interest, what was the thought process behind this seemingly very random cut-off point?
 * Mainly notability concerns. The threshold was to try to trim the list to a around 25-30 buildings like the articles I was using as a model-mainly the List of tallest buildings in Albuquerque and List of tallest buildings in Portland, Oregon featured list articles. I was thinking about using a nice round number like 150 feet but I thought that would make the list a bit too short at 21. The list at one point contained 38 buildings which included buildings like the Lincoln Plaza/Building at an Emporis estimated height of only 104 feet and is described on their website as a "low rise". Other similar articles have a threshold to keep the list at a manageable length because there are too many tall buildings, but this article has one because there are too few tall buildings. I know everyone has a different perspective on what "tall" is but 104 feet isn't it for most people and wouldn't be even close to ranking in similar list articles except the Albuquerque one. This town doesn't have many tall buildings and the list size at this time reflects that. I felt listing more would be scraping the bottom in terms of notability.


 * "Tallest building in Spokane since its completion in 1981." - this is not a complete sentence so should not have a full stop. This applies to many of the notes.
 * Fixed! Deleted all the periods in the notes section.


 * The huge whitespace between the note and the references in many cells looks odd
 * What do you advise be done with them? The ones that look odd and unappealing are the ones with a larger/landscape? picture making a bigger gap between the note lines. Should I get rid of the breaks? I'm probably over complicating things but I thought listing the references on a different line in the notes on rows that have them will make people understand that the references are for the row entry as a whole and not just a particular note.


 * In the "in popular culture" section, you switch between describing the events of the episode in the present and then in the past tense
 * Fixed!


 * Footnote a is not a complete sentence so should not have a full stop
 * Fixed!


 * That's what I got other than the "this list...." opening, which still needs fixing -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:17, 18 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Fixed I think: Switched "list" to "article" in the Lead and in the Tallest buildings section I switched out "list" for "table". Does that work?
 * No, you need to re-write the opening to eliminate anything like "This article contains XYZ" altogether. No article (be it a list or otherwise) should start like that (see MOS:FIRST) - we wouldn't start the article on Spokane itself, for example, with "This article is about Spokane".  The Albuquerque list you mention above was promoted more than 13 years ago when standards were very different -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:00, 21 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Gotcha. I deleted the first sentence entirely and the description of the table. Thanks for the clarification. :) 2001:5B0:4FC0:90A8:710A:ECF3:6FA4:EDF2 (talk) 06:19, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Unless I'm being unbelievably dumb, I can still see a first sentence of "This article ranks the tallest buildings in the U.S. city of Spokane, Washington by height"?? That needs to go and be replaced by a brief intro to what Spokane is i.e. just a couple of sentences along the lines of Spokane is a city in the US state of Washington, etc. -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:09, 22 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Youre not hallucinating, I accidentally reverted the fix after I messed up doing the row headers and reverted to back to before I took out the sentence. It has been taken out again.
 * One last point (I think) from me - where you say "located in eastern Washington", I would rephrase that to "located in the east of the US state of Washington". Not every reader is in the US so this will make it clear what country we are actually talking about here (there's also a Washington in the UK and potentially other countries too), and also (once we have established that it's the US) will make it clear that we are talking about the state, because to probably 99% of non-Americans, if you said "it's in Washington", the first thought would be that you were talking about Washington DC.  Oh, and wikilink Washington -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:44, 24 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Good point, never thought about that. Ill make those changes. Thanks for the advice Chris :)


 * Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:39, 27 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments Support from Gerald Waldo Luis
This article looks pretty good for FL, and I only have a few comments.


 * Support -- Gerald WL  08:04, 31 December 2021 (UTC)

Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)

 * Tables need column scopes for all column header cells, which in combination with row scopes lets screen reader software accurately determine and read out the headers for each cell of a data table. Column scopes can be added by adding !scope=col to each header cell, e.g.  becomes.
 * Please see MOS:DTAB for example table code if this isn't clear. -- Pres N  02:01, 31 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Fixed I think! Thanks for the suggestions PresN :) T85cr1ft19m1n (talk) 08:24, 31 December 2021 (UTC)

Thanks Just wanted to say thanks to everyone for their help with improving this article and their patience in dealing with a first time FL nominator that is bad with the table markup. If anyone has any other improvements, I’m all ears. As for me, I ran out of ideas as of now but I am still trying to think of stuff I can add to it. I’m going to keep digging for sources to see if I can fill the 10-year gap in that deleted tallest building timeline and in the future, I think I’ll add a Tallest under construction list like you see in similar articles where we can list buildings that will make the list in the soon. At the moment, I don’t think there are any but there are some residential towers that reportedly will be under construction in the next year or so. Thanks again all! T85cr1ft19m1n (talk) 01:09, 3 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Comment - The list likely needs to be moved to List of tallest buildings in Spokane, Washington to match its parent article and comply with naming guidelines for U.S. cities. Otherwise, it looks great, though the opening prose is a bit too crufty.  Sounder Bruce  04:29, 4 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Was wondering about that myself but I saw the Albuquerque one didn’t have a state either and then didn’t think much of it. It's a little hit and miss with the naming conventions on similar articles. Little Rock, Knoxville, Grand Rapids, and El Paso are also somewhat obscure cities missing the state. I’m all for changing the name and didn’t know I had permissions do do something like that. I’ll read up on wiki guides on how to do it and change the page name to "List of tallest buildings in Spokane, Washington".
 * Update: The page has a new name. Thanks a bunch for shedding light on the naming conventions.T85cr1ft19m1n (talk) 05:32, 4 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments
Article looks good but here are a few comments:
 * I don't think there should be a section called "tallest under construction" as it is just an empty table. Suggest removing this section. Any new building that is constructed can go directly to the main list.
 * Fixed, I have taken the recent addition out. Most articles of this type have a list of the under construction buildings, so I thought it would almost be expected by others and I thought the article needed a secondary list in lieu of having to delete the Tallest buildings timeline because the history isnt well documented enough.
 * The two sentences "If two or more buildings are of the same height, they are listed in order of floor count, then alphabetically. The "Year" column indicates the year in which a building was completed." should be notes for their respective columns, not in the lead paragraph for this section, since they are about the list, not the contents of the list.
 * Fixed. Good point.
 * I also don't think the notes column is very useful, it's mostly blank. You could add a sentence to the lead paragraph just above the table that says "The tallest buidling from 1929-1981 was...." That would be way more useful and convenient for users than a mostly empty column, the only other notes are a few pieces of trivia, that can be added as "notes" if you really want, but they are not super informative anyway. The note on the review building would fit nicely in the article lead in the sentence on the review building. Mattximus (talk) 15:44, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Thinking I'll probably change this. I could go either way on this, but I think I'll break with convention and take out the Notes column and tack on any notes and associated references as a edn note like you suggest. Should mention every other similar list that I've seen has a mostly blank note column, which I dont see as a problem since it does keep the relevant information visually close to the subject matter, but I do think it takes away from the article aesthetically and looks odd and limits the possible length of any note. Thanks for the food for thought Matt T85cr1ft19m1n (talk) 23:04, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Update: I made the change and I like the way it looks. I took out the date ranges for the tallest buildings notes since the pre-1910 history is incomplete and sketchy and the 1910-present history is already talked about at the end of the Lead. Thanks for the great suggestions T85cr1ft19m1n (talk) 00:00, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Wow this actually looks a lot better. My only suggestion is after the sentence "does not include antenna masts." You can add a sentence or two stating "The tallest building in Spokane from x-x was x building and from x-present was x building" or something like that, just to highlight some important information from the table. Otherwise I do like this list. Note C should probably have a citation as well. But apart from these two, I will support. Nice work on this list! Mattximus (talk) 14:41, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Done. Added an inline to the Emporis existing buildings general reference at the end of former Note C, which is now Note D since I added another factoid note. Also wrote down in prose the known information from the tallest buildings timeline list, that was deleted because the history between 1900-1910 seems to be not well documented and convoluted. Thanks again for the great suggestionsT85cr1ft19m1n (talk) 01:52, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

Source review

 * Citation 1 should link to Washington State Employment Security Department and use the appropriate name.
 * Fixed


 * Citation 2 is a promotional piece by the local chamber and should be replaced with a more reputable source.
 * Fixed. Deleted it; that basic info is in the first citation.


 * I'd rather see Citation 5 replaced with a more specific source that pertains to Spokane. Perhaps it would be worthwhile to check the Spokesman-Review archives on Newspapers.com?
 * Fixed. Referenced another Spokane Historical article.


 * Citation 7 has stray brackets at the end. It should also use "Spokane Historical" as the publication name, rather than a publisher.
 * Fixed I think? Deleted extra brackets. I need clarification to fix the second issue. I thought the publication name and publisher were the same thing, Spokane Historical. If you are talking about the "others" in the reference, that is just meant to convey to readers that the website is a public history project of Eastern Washington University.


 * Spokesman-Review is overlinked in citation 8
 * Fixed


 * Some of the Emporis/SkyscraperPage citations could be cut down; are all of them being used to cite information that is not found in the other?
 * Like most similar articles, I included as a reference all of the typical websites for each listing that has basic building information such as height, mainly Emporis, SkyscraperPage, and CTBUH. I personally think that more information is better and I don't think there is a real pressing need to start deleting references. People can look through each one if they are interested or if they prefer one website over the others and it provides additional verification without harming anything. I strongly believe the references should stay.

Just a few comments, will do a spotcheck later.  Sounder Bruce  08:38, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Sounds good, thanks a bunch! :) T85cr1ft19m1n (talk) 08:46, 24 January 2022 (UTC)

Source review passed; promoting. -- Pres N  15:24, 15 February 2022 (UTC)


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