Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Michael Jackson videography/archive5


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 30 August 2021 (UTC).

Michael Jackson videography

 * Nominator(s): TheWikiholic (talk) 18:09, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

Nominating this for the featured list because I think it has greatly improved from its previous failed nomination. The page was copy-edited by a member of the Guild of Copy Editors. I've also fixed the other issues pointed out during the previous reviews. I hope to fix the remaining issues the way I recently did with this successful nomination. Looking for comments and suggestions. Warmest Regards...— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:09, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

Support – RunningTiger123 (talk) 02:41, 30 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * "It featured Macaulay Culkin, Tess Harper, and George Wendt and Jackson" - the two "and"s read a bit oddly here
 * .— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "The singer's first music video as a solo artist, shows" - no reason for that comma
 * .— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "It was filmed on the 800 Stage stage" - Stage stage?
 * .— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "Darryl wants to prove to his friends private school has not changed him" => "Darryl wants to prove to his friends that private school has not changed him"
 * .— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Image captions that are complete sentences, like "Paula Abdul appears in the "Liberian Girl" video", need full stops. Those that are not complete sentences don't.
 * .— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "reporting on the his eccentric behavior" - there's a stray word in there
 * .— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)


 * That's what I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:00, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
 * take a look now, please.— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Support As I see no other issues. TruthGuardians (talk) 15:36, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

My concerns have all been addressed. The source review has been passed. Giants2008 ( Talk ) 21:19, 28 August 2021 (UTC)

Giants2008 ( Talk ) 22:17, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
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