Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Natalie Portman filmography/archive1


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Natalie Portman filmography

 * Nominator(s): Cowlibob (talk) 18:44, 3 November 2015 (UTC)

Natalie Portman is an actress best known for her roles as a child assassin in Léon: The Professional  (1994), Queen Padmé Amidala  in the Star Wars prequel trilogy, and her Oscar-winning turn as a tortured ballerina in Black Swan (2010). Here's a hopefully comprehensive rundown of her career thus far. As usual look forward to all the helpful comments on how to improve it. Cowlibob (talk) 18:44, 3 November 2015 (UTC)


 * Comments from GagaNutella
 * Star Wars prequel trilogy, italic Star Wars.
 * refs 17,18; 29,30; 37,38; 34,42.
 * Use sortable table on Television section.
 * I don't like the way you compact the year column. You should distinguish them: Sesame Street and The Simpsons. You can wikilink both in this case.
 * The A.V. Club, use work=
 * Where is the publisher of ref 33?
 * Ref 24: MTV → MTV News
 * OVERLINK: The New York Times refs 7, 16, 19, 22, 34, 38, 46; CNN ref 11; Los Angeles Times ref 21; The Daily Telegraph refs 27, 31, 39; Variety refs 29, 32, 40, 41, 42; TV Guide refs 45, 46.
 * OVERLINK: The New York Times refs 7, 16, 19, 22, 34, 38, 46; CNN ref 11; Los Angeles Times ref 21; The Daily Telegraph refs 27, 31, 39; Variety refs 29, 32, 40, 41, 42; TV Guide refs 45, 46.

That's all. Gaga Nutella talk 01:45, 4 November 2015 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review. Ssven2 helped a lot with these. I think these comments have been sorted. Cowlibob (talk) 11:52, 5 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Support. This list looks great, congrats! Gaga Nutella talk 12:16, 5 November 2015 (UTC)

Support — Looks good. Jimknut (talk) 20:01, 6 November 2015 (UTC)


 * "trained by a hitman played by Jean Reno" doesn't really seem like necessary detail
 * Remove the comma from "she appeared in the comedies No Strings Attached, and Your Highness"
 * Add a comma after "made her feature film directorial debut with A Tale of Love and Darkness"
 * For Pride and Prejudice and Zombies, I would use Template:N/a in place of the "—".
 * Sesame Street and The Simpsons only need to be linked once
 * This doesn't mention any of her characters' names; you'll have to find something else and be sure each role is supported by references. Snuggums (talk / edits) 04:50, 17 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Here is a link from the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences that does list a handful of Portman's roles. It should help.
 * --Birdienest81 (talk) 08:03, 17 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Another one here that lists Portman's role in No Strings Attached as Emma Kurtzman.
 * --Birdienest81 (talk) 08:06, 17 November 2015 (UTC)
 * One from Los Angeles Times that lists Emilia Greenleaf role in The Other Woman.
 * --Birdienest81 (talk) 08:10, 17 November 2015 (UTC)
 * One from TheWrap about her Jane Got a Gun role.
 * --Birdienest81 (talk) 08:12, 17 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. Thanks for the help Birdienest81. I think I've sorted most of the above points. Kept the ref as I used it to cite her producer roles but have added additional ones for the character she played etc. I have thought of using the N/A template before but unfortunately it sorts any row with the template under N while the "—" separates them out. Cowlibob (talk) 20:30, 18 November 2015 (UTC)


 * I posted the AMPAS source, but some roles only listed the first name. So I looked for sources that listed the role's complete name (including surname). Anyways, Happy to give it a support.
 * --Birdienest81 (talk) 20:34, 18 November 2015 (UTC)


 * Support looks better now Snuggums (talk / edits) 05:44, 19 November 2015 (UTC)


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