Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Neftchi Baku PFC in European football/archive2


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by The Rambling Man 07:48, 30 January 2013.

Neftchi Baku PFC in European football

 * Nominator(s): --► Safir yüzüklü Cekli  mesaj 14:20, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

I have improved this article considerably and I think it meets all FL-criteria. I am nominating this for featured list as I believe, that after quite some work, it's ready for FL Status. --► Safir yüzüklü Cekli  mesaj 14:20, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

Oppose not ready, try a peer review The Rambling Man (talk) 15:34, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Lead is too long, try four paras max.
 * Why is the list title used in prose to start the lead?
 * Don't bold links in the lead.
 * "5 ... 5 ... one" -> WP:MOSNUM says be consistent, either words or numbers in a sentence for comparable items.
 * The 5 and 5 and 5 and 1 and 1 and 1 add up to 13, not 12, you need to explain the difference.
 * "The club has an excellent European cup record," POV.
 * Overlinking, e.g. Baku.
 * "In 2012-13, Group stage" as a title, not good and if you use year ranges, comply with WP:DASH.
 * Why isn't the list in chronological order?
 * " 30-08-2012." isn't a date format you should use in prose, captions or otherwise.
 * The right-hand table isn't explained at all.
 * Table doesn't comply with WP:ACCESS most notably MOS:DTT.
 * Season years were delineated in the lead with an en-dash, in the table with a slash. Be consistent.
 * Need to check the "result" graphics are readable by screen readers. Not sure they're necessary, would suggest an aggregate score and an explicit Won/Drawn/Lost result.
 * Lots of the Key is irrelevant not used.
 * "Participations" not even sure if this is English.
 * Refs need consistent formats, access dates, correct publication dates, publishers etc.


 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.