Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Paolo Nutini discography/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Dabomb87 23:04, 20 July 2010.

Paolo Nutini discography

 * Nominator(s): Mister sparky (talk) 16:39, 30 June 2010 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because I have done alot of work on improvements lately and believe it is comprehensive and of high quality. There has also been a peer review and its suggestions actioned. Mister sparky (talk) 16:39, 30 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Comment: You sure about the 10/10 director being unknown? Just asking since I'd presume by now the video has been made, so it would be somewhere. that's the only issue I found. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 00:52, 16 July 2010 (UTC)
 * the director can be sourced, but not reliably enough, will add a footnote. Mister sparky (talk) 13:16, 16 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Support. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 03:05, 20 July 2010 (UTC)
 * thank you! :) Mister sparky (talk) 13:02, 20 July 2010 (UTC)

Comments
 * "Singles released from the album were; "Last Request", "Jenny Don't Be Hasty", "Rewind" and "New Shoes"." -- Should be a regular colon, not a semi.
 * fixed both occurences. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)
 * "In May 2009 Nutini released his second album, Sunny Side Up, which debuted at number one in the UK and in Ireland." -- Comma after 2009
 * added. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)
 * " It contained the singles; "Candy", "Coming Up Easy", "Pencil Full of Lead" and "10/10"." -- Colon not a semicolon.
 * fixed. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)
 * I feel the lead needs to be extended just a bit more, add something to not bore the reader. Right now all I read was a literal technical summary of the list, nothing really that informs the reader about the artist himself or his live tours that became albums, etc.
 * that's what the lead is supposed to do, summarise the contents of the article. general info about the artist himself is in the artists main page. can add more info about the live album and ep's. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)
 * "Performed at the Live Earth concert, Wembley Stadium, London 7 July 2007" --> "Performed at the Live Earth concert at Wembley Stadium in London on 7 July 2007"
 * changed. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)
 * "These songs have not appeared on a studio album by Paolo Nutini." -- I think you can just refer to him by his last name here.
 * changed. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)
 * For the 10/10 director, I recommend like in other FLC's to add a footnote explaining that a reliable reference has not been found to verify the director.
 * will add. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Under sales for the studio albums, I would place a centered emdash in the second entry; IMO its better to have something there than just an empty cell.
 * added. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Are bullet points really necessary in the other appearances table?-- T ru  c o   503 01:17, 17 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Support -- Issues resolved; meets WP:WIAFL.
 * thank you! :) Mister sparky (talk) 16:06, 18 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Support – Took a quick look at this one and nothing seemed out of place.  Giants2008  ( 27 and counting ) 21:12, 20 July 2010 (UTC)
 * thank you! :) Mister sparky (talk) 21:30, 20 July 2010 (UTC)


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