Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Sarah Connor discography/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by 10:02, 25 March 2013 (UTC).

Sarah Connor discography

 * Nominator(s): Till  04:55, 17 January 2013 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because... I feel that it meets the criteria. I completely revamped the article yesterday and wrote a new lead, and fixed the tables and sourcing. Till 04:55, 17 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Support. High quality content and great use of citations and formatting and standardization in tabular fashion throughout. &mdash; Cirt (talk) 21:35, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks :) Till  01:10, 26 January 2013 (UTC)

Comments The prose is a bit dry, but I don't see much that could be done about it, and since I'm trying to be less of a nitpicker, I won't say anything more about the citations, supporting instead.  Good raise  14:55, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * "Naughty but Nice, Connor's fourth album, became her highest-charting to date;" – Use an "as of" or similar construct to avoid this version of the article becoming incorrect at some point in the future.
 * I have removed this in its entirety. Till  23:07, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * "The singer's fifth studio album Soulicious was released in 2007" – Missing commas.
 * Added commas Till  23:07, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * There's a stray hyphen in ref. 28.
 * Removed Till  23:07, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * "GmbH" is not usually part of a company's name. In citations, it can be omitted, just like "Inc." or "LLC."
 * Removed Till  23:07, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Till  23:07, 27 February 2013 (UTC)
 * I have copyedited bits of the article to avoid dryness. I hope the prose is a bit more enticing to read now Till  23:18, 27 February 2013 (UTC)


 * Support, looks good now. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:47, 13 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks :) Till  06:10, 13 March 2013 (UTC)

Comments –
 * "and nominated for 'Best National Single' at the 2002 ECHO Awards." Needs "was" before "nominated".
 * Done Till  06:17, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Lead image could use alt text. Giants2008  ( Talk ) 21:16, 22 March 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't think I know what that is, Till  06:17, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Have a butchers at WP:ALT. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:31, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
 * I have added, 'A woman in a white shirt'. Till  23:38, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.