Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/The Office (American season 4)/archive1


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The list was not promoted by User:Matthewedwards 03:15, 20 October 2008.

The Office (US TV series) season 4
previous FLC (09:21, 25 August 2008)

Is this list ready to be featured? Nergaal (talk) 17:01, 6 October 2008 (UTC)

Comments
 * What makes the following reliable sources?
 * http://www.officetally.com/
 * http://www.celebrityspider.com/
 * http://tvbythenumbers.com/
 * Current ref 29 (CBS and ABC...) says the publisher is ZapToIt but it links to a page on Office Tally. I think you got a link mixed up somewhere.
 * Pick either last name first or first name first on your references and stick with it. Right now you have authors in both formats.
 * Otherwise sources look good, links checked out with the link checker tool. Ealdgyth - Talk 13:22, 7 October 2008 (UTC)
 * what do you think of the new links? Nergaal (talk) 19:05, 15 October 2008 (UTC)

Comments Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 16:55, 15 October 2008 (UTC)
 * repetitive wording in "who are both executive producers on both versions"
 * "with Feig and Whittingham both directing multiple episodes." both isn't needed here
 * "ten of which... four of which"
 * remove the "the" at "returned on the February 11,"
 * How's now? Nergaal (talk) 18:14, 15 October 2008 (UTC)
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