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 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by The Rambling Man 16:11, 27 September 2011.

The Simpsons (season 10)

 * Nominator(s): Theleftorium (talk) 15:14, 1 August 2011 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because it is needed for the Simpsons season 10 Good topic. Theleftorium (talk) 15:14, 1 August 2011 (UTC)

Comments
 * Fox arose—however, it was soon --> I don't think thats a correct usage of em-dash.
 * Fixed. Theleftorium (talk) 16:46, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
 * The tenth season was the second for which Mike Scully served as show runner --> Doesn't sound right. Try to rephrase.
 * Fixed. Theleftorium (talk) 16:46, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
 * File:Simpsons s10.png --> album, single, book, dvd etc coves shouldn't ideally exceed 300px in its length or breadth. Try reducing it a little.
 * Fixed. Theleftorium (talk) 16:46, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Scully was popular with the staff members, many of whom have praised his organization and management skills. Writer Tom Martin has said that he was "quite possibly the best boss I've ever worked for" and "a great manager of people". --> Somehow doesnt seem right to me. The context doesnt fit here, seeing that it would have been more appropriate tagging along with the area that says that this season was the start of decline. A kind of relation exists.
 * I disagree. I think it fits perfectly. This section is about the production of the show, and what the staff members thought of him certainly belongs here. It shouldn't be in a "Critical reception" section since that is for critics opinions. Theleftorium (talk) 16:50, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
 * US$30,000 --> cluttersome, why not a simple $30,000?
 * Fixed. Theleftorium (talk) 16:46, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
 * with the actors threatening to strike--> ??
 * I don't understand the problem? Theleftorium (talk) 16:46, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
 * It should be "actors threatening to go on a strike" I believe. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 06:48, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Well, strike is an actual verb, but I changed it to your suggestion. Theleftorium (talk) 10:06, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Avoid this .[20][21][22][23][24][25]... by using WP:CITEKILL.
 * This one is left. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 06:48, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Done. Theleftorium (talk) 10:06, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Similarly, Coeur d'Alene Press ---> Similarly, a writer/writers of Coeur d'Alene Press
 * Fixed. Theleftorium (talk) 16:46, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
 * is held responsive --> you mean responsible?
 * Fixed. Theleftorium (talk) 16:46, 11 August 2011 (UTC)

More to come.... — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 16:03, 11 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Excellent, thanks! Theleftorium (talk) 16:46, 11 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Support. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 22:39, 5 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking a look! Theleftorium (talk) 15:52, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

Comment - check out the two edits I made to fix the en dashes and non-breaking space issues. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:08, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh I see now! Thanks! Theleftorium (talk) 15:11, 10 September 2011 (UTC)

– HonorTheKing (talk) 14:56, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
 * You should fix the dead link from TheSimpsons.com in the External links, but once fixed I Support.
 * Fixed, thanks! Theleftorium (talk) 16:51, 13 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Support the promotion of this list. — Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 07:36, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you! :) Theleftorium (talk) 09:59, 18 September 2011 (UTC)


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