Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Timeline of the 2011 Atlantic hurricane season/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Giants2008 17:10, 11 September 2012.

Timeline of the 2011 Atlantic hurricane season

 * Nominator(s): TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 04:00, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

The 2011 Atlantic hurricane season was one of the most active on record, with a total of 19 named storms. It also included the sixth costliest hurricane in United States history: Hurricane Irene. After working diligently on this article for several days, I feel that it now meets the criteria to become a Featured List. Any comments regarding how I can improve this article are appreciated. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 04:00, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

Comment this list is unstable, as there have been numerous reverts within the last few days. With that said, nothing actionable can be done here, so TA, don't worry about this, it should fix itself, this is more to the FLC directors than anything. All the ADT stuff needs to be changed to AST, as the NHC does not sue ADT since all the places within the US are on AST year around. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  15:53, 23 July 2012 (UTC)
 * done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 16:07, 23 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Support now. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  03:42, 25 July 2012 (UTC)

Quick Comment - in some cases you've misspelled nbsp and said "nsbp" instead, so they show up on regular viewing. TheAustinMan (Talk 16:00, 23 July 2012 (UTC)
 * done TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 16:07, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

Additional Comment - after a thorough read-thru this morning, I noted some additional things:
 * "Hurricane Irene weakens to a tropical storm and simultaneously makes its eight landfall on Brigantine Island, New Jersey, with winds of 70 mph (110 km/h)." - Eight → Eighth
 * "1200 UTC (8 a.m. AST) – Tropical Storm Maria" - Since you use [h]:[mm] on all other occasions, change 8 a.m. AST to 8:00 a.m AST.
 * Since Lee and Irene had their lowest pressure and highest winds separate from each other, you are forced to say that they "reached peak intensity" twice for each of them. If this was intentional then leave it alone, but if it was not maybe you can try saying something different for them, like "reached its minimum pressure at [xxx] mbar (hPa;..)". Correct me if I'm wrong.
 * Conditional support if these issues are tweaked. TheAustinMan (Talk 14:32, 25 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Yes, it was typed that way on purpose. Fixed the other two comments. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 18:07, 25 July 2012 (UTC)
 *  +Support  - Now that my issues have been fixed, I can now support this article. Timeline of the 2011 Atlantic hurricane season describes in detail the events which occurred during the hurricane season, and has an excellent lead. By using the elements of past featured timelines, this article in my opinion meets the criteria in WP:FLCR. Nice work! TheAustinMan (Talk 20:10, 25 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Comment now the timeline graph is messed up and the page is becoming unstable again. Not going to strike my support though. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  05:23, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Scratch that, we're fine now.
 * Image review: No copyright related problems found.  Good raise  00:08, 1 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Comment what is the status of this? The Rambling Man (talk) 09:20, 3 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I have been busy lately and have not been able to take care of these minor problems. Thanks to YE for doing so for me. Any more concerns? TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk) 19:28, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Support didn't find anything. :( Lol. Great work. TBrandley 22:36, 7 September 2012 (UTC)
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