Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/United States presidential elections in Hawaii/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:27, 4 October 2021 (UTC).

United States presidential elections in Hawaii

 * Nominator(s): Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 03:32, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because I feel that these types of lists on United States presidential elections have a great potential to be FL. I almost completely re-formatted the list, added a lead, and key for political parties. It lists all the elections in which Hawaii participated, with votes and percentage. I intend to make similar changes to all the lists within this series. I would respond to every comment, and try to bring this nomination to FL standards whenever needed. With one of the list (United States presidential elections in Washington, D.C.) currently a FLC, with multiple comprehensive reviews, all resolved, I nominate this too. Check this page for progress. Thanks! (47 states more to go) – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 03:32, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments from ChrisTheDude

 * "Hawaii has been won by the Democratic party in every presidential elections" =>"Hawaii has been won by the Democratic party in every presidential election"
 * Think that's all I've got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:09, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
 * @ Done. Thanks for taking a look.  Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 12:14, 6 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:19, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments from ExcellentWheatFarmer

 * "which remains the largest margin of victory in the state" -> "which remains the largest ever margin of victory in the state's history."
 * Otherwise, this looks good! ExcellentWheatFarmer (talk) 15:50, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
 * @ Nice to see you here. I have made the change. Thanks!  Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:53, 17 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Support ExcellentWheatFarmer (talk) 15:58, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments from RunningTiger123
— RunningTiger123 (talk) 04:05, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "the Democratic party" → "the Democratic Party"
 * Done Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:17, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "voted Bernie Sanders" → "voted for Bernie Sanders" (two occurrences)
 * Done Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:17, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "Various polls have ranked Hawaii..." – but you only cite one poll, so you need more sources.
 * changed to "Gallup Poll has ranked..." Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:17, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Inconsistent use of spacing after ‡ – some items have a space between party affiliation and the symbol, while others don't. Pick one or the other (I personally prefer the first option).
 * Done Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:17, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "Gallup Polls" should be capitalized in source 13
 * Done Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:17, 21 September 2021 (UTC)
 * @ Done all. Thanks for taking a look.  Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:17, 21 September 2021 (UTC)

Support – good to see more progress on these lists! RunningTiger123 (talk) 19:58, 21 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Source review – As with the other list in this series that I gave a source check to, the reliability and formatting look fine throughout and there are no dead links indicated by the link-checker tool. This review is a pass. Giants2008  ( Talk ) 22:22, 2 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the source review. Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:09, 3 October 2021 (UTC)

Giants2008 ( Talk ) 22:16, 3 October 2021 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.