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 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:27, 17 October 2021 (UTC).

Yash Chopra filmography

 * Nominator(s): Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 12:05, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

The filmography of the well-known Indian director and producer Yash Chopra. I really believe this list meets the FL criteria. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 12:05, 17 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:50, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

Comments from HAL

 * His birth year of 1932 is not supported by the provided reference.
 * Yes, it is. Look at the second slide of the ref #1 --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:56, 23 June 2021 (UTC)


 * named Yash Raj Films Remove "named".
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:56, 23 June 2021 (UTC)


 * emerged as a commercial success in both India and overseas Use of "emerge" here seems strange.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:56, 23 June 2021 (UTC)


 * family who are Reword - family is singular.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:56, 23 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Is Rediff.com considered reliable?
 * Yes, it is. Rediff.com is the oldest Indian website, and many GA/FA about Indian films used it as a source. Many of the writers are also notable, like Dinesh Raheja, Sukanya Verma, Shobha Warrier, and Raja Sen. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:57, 23 June 2021 (UTC)


 * it was because action and crime films --> "this was because action and crime films"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:56, 23 June 2021 (UTC)


 * one of his career's best films --> "one of his best films"
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:56, 23 June 2021 (UTC)


 * incest-themed Is incest really a theme?
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:56, 23 June 2021 (UTC)


 * I'm not a fan of the use of checkmarks in the table. Could you maybe use Yes ?
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:56, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

Overall, pretty good work. I'll be glad to see another featured director's filmography. ~ HAL  333  20:03, 22 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * Full stop missing in the alt text.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 22:29, 27 June 2021 (UTC)


 * You can mention in the table that 'Jab Tak Hai Jaan' was his posthumous release.
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 22:29, 27 June 2021 (UTC)


 * older brother --> elder brother
 * Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 22:29, 27 June 2021 (UTC)

Yashthepunisher (talk) 13:14, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Support this nom. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:56, 28 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Image review Pass
 * The only image File:Yash Chopra 2012.jpg is licenced under CC Attr 3.0, and reviewed in an OTRS ticket. Pass for image licencing.  Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:28, 17 August 2021 (UTC)

Pamzeis
Please forgive me if I screw anything up... Ping me once these are resolved! Pamzeis (talk) 07:56, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
 * the drama Waqt about a family who are separated after a natural disaster. — kinda awkward
 * won him a first Best — a first for him or something else?
 * popularity had begun to → popularity began to
 * feature was named as the — delete "as" as redundant
 * were popular among the audience — were the films box office successes? Or did audiences give them positive reviews? Clarify
 * Also "the audience" is kinda vague
 * several well-performing films — kinda vague. Can we be more specific (e.g. commercial and critical successes)?
 * films including Mohabbatein (2000) — should there be a comma after "films"?
 * for its sensitive portrayal — WP:VOICEy
 * Done —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 09:04, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Support. Pamzeis (talk) 09:35, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
 * Oh, and on an unrelated note, I'd appreciate any comments here. Pamzeis (talk) 09:37, 14 October 2021 (UTC)

Source review passed; promoting. -- Pres N  14:22, 16 October 2021 (UTC)


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