Wikipedia:Featured list removal candidates/List of San Jose Sharks players/archive1


 * The following is an archived discussion of a featured list removal nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was kept by The Rambling Man 16:02, 11 July 2009.

List of San Jose Sharks players

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I am nominating this for featured list removal because it is not up to current standards, like the NJD and CBJ lists. It's got a small lead, few references, and multiple other problems. – ( iMatthew  • talk ) at 17:52, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
 * I agree the lead needs to be fixed up, references however are fine as there doesn't need to be a huge number of references, the reference that are there just have to cover all the information which I think the references there do since they all list the players and the stats which is all this list is really about. -Djsasso (talk) 18:17, 24 June 2009 (UTC)

-- Crzycheetah 04:58, 2 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Concerns
 * The first sentence in the lead...is obsolete. No bolded links, no word "complete"...
 * There should be at least two paragraphs in the lead.
 * Definitely needs updating. What is it, a month since the 2008-09 season ended?
 * The Key section needs tidying up a little. Those 3 tables are randomly placed. example
 * The note about "seasons column" is missing here, see the example above.
 * None of the references mention captaincy and award winners; citations are needed.
 * Boldface should be avoided in tables; the only exception is the heading.
 * A little info about "rotating captaincy" would be a plus.
 * There should be links to the 2008-09 media guide pages.

Comment See List of Detroit Red Wings players and List of Chicago Blackhawks players for examples of FL NHL players lists that are up to standard. Dabomb87 (talk) 22:25, 3 July 2009 (UTC)

I rewrote the lead a bit. Hopefully someone else can help finished the job since I am not interested (and don't know much about it) in hockey at all.— Chris!  c t 23:13, 6 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Remove – The lead still needs some expansion, and a cite should be provided for the end of the first paragraph. Several of Crzycheetah's comments remain unresolved as well, notably the one about the list being a year out-of-date.  Giants2008  ( 17-14 ) 22:20, 7 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Delist Lead looks a little better, but much more needs to be done to bring this up to FL standards. Dabomb87 (talk) 17:35, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

Comment The pictures need alternative text. Dabomb87 (talk) 02:48, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Comment - Dabomb or Giant: Are you guys willing to help me save this? I need some more helps. I already started with the lead.— Chris!  c t 17:46, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I'll see what I can do later today. Dabomb87 (talk) 17:47, 9 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I'll be around tomorrow to beef up the lead.  Giants2008  ( 17-14 ) 00:06, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I will also work on this tomorrow.— Chris!  c t 01:05, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I did quite a bit to the list tonight. As far as I can see, the only things need doing now are the expansion of the lead and the stats need updating through 2008—09. - Rjd0060 (talk) 02:24, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I went ahead and updated the stats myself. Lead still needs expansion. - Rjd0060 (talk) 03:35, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
 * Done for all images. - Rjd0060 (talk) 03:35, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

Gave the lead a few more sentences. It still could use more expansion, but it's a good start. I'll be on vacation the next two days, but will try to do more after this weekend.  Giants2008  ( 17-14 ) 19:35, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
 * My lack of knowledge on the team or hockey prevented me from adding more. But, I will try.— Chris!  c t 01:31, 11 July 2009 (UTC)


 * Please withdraw this FLRC. I'll get around to fixing it when I have a chance.  iMatthew  talk  at 14:34, 11 July 2009 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.