Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Byron Brown/1

Byron Brown

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 * Result: Delisted. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 19:12, 22 February 2023 (UTC)

Article has been tagged as an advertisement since 2021. I share concerns about neutrality. There are elements that are too positive, but the article also has a controversy section,(WP:CSECTION).
 * Article uses a facebook post by Brown to talk about endorsements
 * Third paragraph of early career lists distinctions, which I believe needs culling
 * Last paragraph early elective experience is also bit too positive. Unclear why he was called James Bond..
 * Sentences like: " By January 2009 State of the City Address, Brown reported that crime had fallen 12% and homicide by 50% since he had taken office". As numbers can be cherrypicked, these should come from a secondary source. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 19:35, 15 February 2023 (UTC)