Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Empire State/1

Empire State

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 * Result: Fails GA criterion 3. AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 20:27, 30 June 2023 (UTC)

GA from 2011. While there are some things that don't have inline citations like I have to wonder, is this article broad enough? Sure, there's a good amount on the its possible origin and some of its namesakes. But, what its usage in general? Like how the nickname was used throughout history. Onegreatjoke (talk) 23:26, 21 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Historian Milton M. Klein proposed that the name may have accompanied the success of the Black Ball Line in 1818 "because of the signal advantage the regularity of shipping gave to New York's merchants over those in other coastal cities." He claims that, by 1820, it was clear that "Empire State" was in wide use, though he is doubtful that a clear origin of the term will ever be determined.
 * Delist. Profoundly fails the broadness criteria. &spades;PMC&spades; (talk) 07:44, 27 June 2023 (UTC)