Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Paul McDermott/1

Paul McDermott

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 * Result: Considerable uncited information remains, failing GA criterion 2. AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 00:48, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

The article has sections missing citations, in particular the Television career section is uncited, and many sentences in Live Comedy. It is an immediate fail for Criteria 3 of WP:GAFAIL and the "Verifiable with no original research" criteria for good articles.

As a side point, since it was listed in September 2008, his career has evolved quite a bit, and he has been involved in television since 2015 but this is not covered in the article. LibStar (talk) 23:34, 23 May 2023 (UTC)


 * I improved the Television career section with sources that were already on other sections, @LibStar. Yours sincerely, TechGeek105 (his talk page) 07:41, 24 May 2023 (UTC)