Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Starlight (Muse song)/1

Starlight (Muse song)

 * • Watch article reassessment page • GAN review
 * Result: Delist per comments below - although the criteria have not changed substantially since 2007, the article needs some work. Geometry guy 00:11, 1 February 2011 (UTC)

This article was promoted a while back when the criteria was different. My criticisms:


 * Paragraphs are too short in most places and sentences seem too choppy.
 * Lead does not really seem up to scratch.
 * Critical reception could be expanded and tidied more to look like Give Me Your Eyes or Break Your Heart for example.

- Spiderone  12:55, 8 January 2011 (UTC)

Further comments


 * Checklinks Most links seem to be okay apart from the last one.
 * MuseWiki (#6) seems to be unreliable. Also, MuseLive (#8) is a forum. Spiderone  16:40, 8 January 2011 (UTC)


 * Comment - Still no work done to address issues Spiderone  09:44, 27 January 2011 (UTC)