Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Sunil Chhetri/1

Sunil Chhetri

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 * Result: Delisted. Article still has some unsourced statistics, as the nominator points out (failing criterion 2b). There also seem to be some issues with WP:LAYOUT (criterion 1b), such as the many short subsections and the unusual format for subheadings. Nomination has been open for several weeks with no action. Khazar2 (talk) 19:25, 11 November 2013 (UTC).

First of all, I am still wondering how this page passed the first time, I revamped the page a bit a few months ago and the amount of unsourced information and mistakes in sentences and grammar were numerous. Personally, before going back into the article to get some more revamping done I would like to hear from the community on what they think I should do and how I can improve the article to get it to good-article status again. Cheers. --ArsenalFan700 (talk) 16:43, 19 October 2013 (UTC)
 * can you clarify in what ways the current draft doesn't qualify for GA? It sounds like you've already checked/fixed it, and GAR really isn't a place to get general feedback. You might try Peer Review if you're interested in improving the article in a more general way. Thanks for taking this one on! -- Khazar2 (talk) 02:45, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Perhaps a peer review would have been better for this. However, in terms of getting this article fixed, I only did it up to the International section. The rest is still the same with what I believe to be plenty of errors with unreferenced work. Anyway, I will start the PR and see where it goes. Cheers. --ArsenalFan700 (talk) 03:36, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Looking more closely at this one, I see your point; I misunderstood originally and thought you had cleaned up the issues already. Sorry about that. Thanks for your work to clean parts of this up, and to bring this to the community's attention. -- Khazar2 (talk) 19:25, 11 November 2013 (UTC)