Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/We Don't Need to Whisper/1

We Don't Need to Whisper

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 * Result: Kept. The article received copyediting and the issues with the prose were cleared. Hardcore Metallica Fan (talk) 07:42, 3 June 2014 (UTC).

After promoting this to GA status, I was notified of some further prose issues in the article. I gave it another read-through, and after doing so realized that the prose (and tone especially) is not GA quality, and that I should not have promoted it. I notified the primary author of the extra issues a while back, but the article has not been touched since, and as a result I am bringing this here. Wizardman 16:44, 23 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Why not simply fix up the prose errors yourself? XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 03:50, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Yes, I've noted the same problems with the prose. I think that we'll need input from the nominator on this one. The issue appears to be serious and I suggest delisting the article if corrections aren't made in near future.--Вик Ретлхед (talk) 11:16, 29 March 2014 (UTC)
 * I recommend making a GoCE request to copyedit this article. }I Mr* &#124; (60nna) I{ 04:38, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
 * Okay, I'm copyediting We Don't Need to Whisper. }I Mr* &#124; (60nna) I{ 06:19, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
 * See this: http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=We_Don%27t_Need_to_Whisper&diff=605999062&oldid=599341261 }I Mr* &#124; (60nna) I{ 07:58, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
 * And this: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=We_Don%27t_Need_to_Whisper&diff=606003382&oldid=604856907 }I Mr* &#124; (60nna) I{ 07:59, 27 April 2014 (UTC)
 * It's been one month since I copyedited this article, and no response. I'm taking down my Midtown Madness GoCE request. }I Mr* &#124; (60nna) I{ 02:23, 29 May 2014 (UTC)
 * I made a GoCE request to copyedit the somehow-related Blink-182 article. }I Mr* &#124; (60nna) I{ 02:29, 29 May 2014 (UTC)