Wikipedia:Graphics Lab/Illustration workshop/Archive/Oct 2015

=Stale=

Gallery of Solar System moons, and several minor planets and comets

 * Article(s):
 * List of natural satellites


 * Request:
 * *Please remove the distracting watermarks in it, if possible. The author has released the image under the Creative Commonst Attribution-Share Alike 4.0 International.


 * Its title is both in incorrect English and not quite accurate. For example, Ganymede is the ninth-largest known body in the Solar System, larger than the planet Mercury, which hardly makes it a 'small body'. The shortest accurate title that I can think of is "Non-planets of the Solar System to scale".
 * Its subtitle is not quite accurate either (Pluto is not a planet, so its moons do not fall under any of the categories mentioned) and is better in sentence case. It should be "Dwarf planets (Pluto & Ceres) • Moons of planets and dwarf planets • Asteroids • Comets".
 * Sentence case is also better elsewhere in the image
 * The zoomed-in images have a "NO TO SCALE", which should be "NOT TO SCALE"
 * There is "THE RAPRESENTATION etc.". I can't quite figure out what this is supposed to tell the viewer, so I don't quite know how this is best rephrased. At the very least it should be "THE REPRESENTATION" and "TO SCALE".
 * There is a list of spacecraft that took images of the objects in the image. It should say "Voyager 1–2", with an endash (–), not a hyphen (-). There is also "Cassini-Huygens", which is best shortened to simply "Cassini", because the Huygens part was a lander and didn't take images from space.
 * Every header has "XX moon(s) system". The "system" is simply unnecessary and should be removed.
 * The asteroids' header says "Some Asteroid Belt Bodies". This is both inaccurate (433 Eros is a near-Earth asteroid) and clumsily said. It's better if it simply says "Some asteroids" or "Several asteroids".
 * In the Pluto system, Stix → Styx
 * Also in the Pluto system, there is a better image available of Nix (File:Nix_in_Color_Released_September_11_2015.png) than currently used in the image. --JorisvS (talk) 15:09, 6 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Graphist opinion(s):

=Resolved=

USVA headstones

 * Article(s):
 * United States Department of Veterans Affairs emblems for headstones and markers

Previous request here: Graphics_Lab/Illustration_workshop/Archive/Oct_2010. These were images loaded since the first request in 2010. -- --evrik (talk) 18:39, 9 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Request:

BTW, though this images was already converted, it could really stand a clean-up. The original is somewhat muddy. Look at this image: http://www.moravian.org/images/moravian/aboutchurchpix/agnusspotcolorsforweb.png from this website www.moravian.org/the-moravian-church/history


 * Graphist opinion(s):
 * I'll work on these as I'm available. Two updated above. Cheers, Mliu92 (talk) 18:43, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks! --evrik (talk) 00:55, 12 October 2015 (UTC)
 * This should complete the request. Let me know what you think about the simplification of emblem 27 (Moravian Church). Cheers, Mliu92 (talk) 21:12, 25 October 2015 (UTC)

Create updated sugar price graph

 * Article(s):
 * Sugar

This graph hasn't been updated since 2006. The prices after 2006 are: Please change the color of the line from red to blue after 2010 since the methodology for calculating the price changed in 2011. Kaldari (talk) 19:05, 13 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Request:
 * 2007: 11.60
 * 2008: 13.84
 * 2009: 18.72
 * 2010: 27.03
 * 2011: 27.22
 * 2012: 21.69
 * 2013: 17.46
 * 2014: 16.34
 * Graphist opinion(s):
 * ✅ uploaded new version to this current file - FOX 52 (talk) 07:03, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Could you center the "year (calendar)" label at the bottom? Kaldari (talk) 20:45, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
 * OK, ✅ - FOX 52 (talk) 20:52, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
 * OK, ✅ - FOX 52 (talk) 20:52, 15 October 2015 (UTC)

Update of commons:File:ORD Airport Diagram.svg

 * Article(s):
 * O'Hare International Airport


 * Request:
 * The runway diagram of O'Hare International Airport is outdated; they added another runway. A current diagram, as PDF, can be found here. An update would be appreciated. -- Huon (talk) 19:07, 15 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Graphist opinion(s):
 * It looks like BorgHunter has already updated the illustration from the FAA source to add 10R/28L on 15 October 2015. Please verify if this request should be marked complete. Cheers, Mliu92 (talk) 16:42, 23 October 2015 (UTC)
 * ✅: My thanks to BorgHunter! Huon (talk) 18:36, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

Requests for comment/5 millionth article logo

 * Article(s):
 * All Wikipedia pages!


 * Request:
 * For the 5 millionth article, a special Wikipedia logo will be used. I think most of the nominated logos are pretty sad looking, so I thought I'd ask here for additional submissions! Please submit additional mock-ups at Requests for comment/5 millionth article logo. -- Calliopejen1 (talk) 18:16, 19 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Graphist opinion(s):
 * ✅ - closed - FOX 52 (talk) 04:22, 30 October 2015 (UTC)

Blasting caps
May someone please vectorize this scheme, before moving it to Commons?--Kopiersperre (talk) 19:00, 20 October 2015 (UTC)


 * How does this look? I did not trace the original drawing (proportions set by eye). Cheers, Mliu92 (talk) 17:05, 21 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for you fine work.--Kopiersperre (talk) 15:30, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for you fine work.--Kopiersperre (talk) 15:30, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

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Sun Cellular logo

 * Article(s):
 * Sun Cellular


 * Request:
 * I am asking for the vectorization of the logo as well as the removal of the white background and the words "choose better". The source can be found here. Israel's Son 05:02, 29 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Graphist opinion(s):


 * How about this? Cheers, Mliu92 (talk) 18:19, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
 * That's exactly what I'm looking for. Thank you, Mliu92! Israel's Son 23:17, 29 October 2015 (UTC)

UP Fighting Maroons logo

 * Article(s):
 * UP Fighting Maroons


 * Request:
 * Please vectorize the logo and remove the white background. The high-resolution source can be found here. Thanks! Israel's Son 04:50, 4 November 2015 (UTC)


 * Graphist opinion(s):
 * I'd suggest placing against a transparent background - FOX 52 (talk) 16:46, 6 November 2015 (UTC)
 * That's what I'm saying. OK, you may start now. Israel's Son 22:06, 6 November 2015 (UTC)
 * I took some liberties with the layout to improve the left/right symmetry of the logo during the vector process. Cheers, Mliu92 (talk) 06:03, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Nice work though, but I think you need to resize it since it is non-free. Israel's Son 06:58, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * I resized it to 10% of the original upload, but it's a vector and will scale cleanly up now. Cheers, Mliu92 (talk) 07:31, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * And that's it! Thanks, Mliu92. Israel's Son 10:08, 9 November 2015 (UTC)

Route 66 TV logo

 * Article(s):
 * Route 66 (TV series)


 * Request:
 * I am requesting a creation of a stand-alone logo, so I can use the free logo to replace the title card. -- George Ho (talk) 00:40, 6 November 2015 (UTC)


 * Graphist opinion(s):
 * how's this ? - FOX 52 (talk) 00:38, 7 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Can you change the font color to white, remove the black background, and create an opaque transparency? George Ho (talk) 01:53, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Keep in mind if I change the text to white against transparent I don't know how much you will be able to see of it - FOX 52 (talk) 02:48, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Depends on pixels of a black border of logo. George Ho (talk) 03:35, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * ✅ - FOX 52 (talk) 04:54, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Can you add font borders (i.e. around the font)? George Ho (talk) 05:40, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * added - FOX 52 (talk) 16:36, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * I believe that doing an exact replica is not easy; I know you did your best. Can you make the SVG image larger in pixels, so borders would look nice and easy to bear? --George Ho (talk) 17:43, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Not a problem and done - FOX 52 (talk) 18:30, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * The image becomes harder to see, especially when viewed in 220px. I added the image here for readership. Maybe the font should be plateau-ish (more ink-ish, maybe) in white color, as seen in the non-free image. I don't know the basics of SVG developing, so you can make it more visible. George Ho (talk) 18:46, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Or maybe just make the borders more solid... but not too solid. George Ho (talk) 18:47, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * I've changed it to black and white, I think that is your best option, maybe you can get another editors input cheers - FOX 52 (talk) 20:53, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Fine, I'll wait for others to make other versions. George Ho (talk) 20:59, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Wait, Fox, can you reverse colors of the background and the font? I mean, make the background transparent and the font black? Or create another version at a separate file? I didn't say proper words. George Ho (talk) 22:01, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Yeah I just reversed the values and went transparent - FOX 52 (talk) 22:47, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Love it! Simple and neat. --George Ho (talk) 23:50, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Love it! Simple and neat. --George Ho (talk) 23:50, 9 November 2015 (UTC)

Sera, Hiroshima

 * Article(s):
 * Sera, Hiroshima


 * Request:
 * grainy and artifact-y, please make png or svg… -- Kintetsubuffalo (talk) 04:40, 8 November 2015 (UTC)


 * Graphist opinion(s):
 * Let me know what you think. I re-centered the logo based on the position of the round circle. Cheers, Mliu92 (talk) 17:34, 8 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Much better, thank you so much!--Kintetsubuffalo (talk) 23:16, 8 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Much better, thank you so much!--Kintetsubuffalo (talk) 23:16, 8 November 2015 (UTC)