Wikipedia:Miscellany for deletion/User:Scrat55/sandbox

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 * The following discussion is an archived debate of the proposed deletion of the miscellaneous page below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the page's talk page or in a deletion review).  No further edits should be made to this page.

The result of the discussion was keep - nomination withdrawn. JohnCD (talk) 16:35, 30 July 2014 (UTC)

User:Scrat55/sandbox


Withdrawn by nominator: Creator has has removed a lot of bias from the draft, so longer looks purely promotional.(I don't know how to close an AfD, so can someone please do that?) Mr. Guye (talk) 19:37, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Promotional. Mr. Guye (talk) 02:26, 23 July 2014 (UTC)


 * Keep - it may be a bit promotional in wording, but it is not an overt advertisement. The article is a recently (yesterday) created draft, and so it should be allowed to be continued as a draft.  If you have conerns about the tone, you might want too provide the editor with some guidance on wording.

What would be the best way to tone down the wording so it sounds more informative. It is not, by any means, made to be promotional but more informative. What changes should be made to be able to keep this page and for it to be considered for approval and live posting? Scrat55 (talk) 14:00, 23 July 2014 (UTC) Scrat55
 * I have answered on your talk page as it would be abit off-topic for this discussion. -- Whpq (talk) 14:41, 23 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much Whpq! Scrat55 (talk) 15:00, 23 July 2014 (UTC)Scrat55

I have made some adjustments and will continue to do so throughout the week. I am also reading the First Article wiki page to make this submission more WP appropriate. More changes to come. Scrat55 (talk) 15:00, 23 July 2014 (UTC)Scrat55

I did a complete overhaul of the text, removed peacock words and sentences and loosened up on the detail description of the services. Please let me know if this is in the right path to lift the deletion. Thank you. Scrat55 (talk) 19:21, 23 July 2014 (UTC)Scrat55


 * Yeah, it looks better now. Mr. Guye (talk) 19:37, 23 July 2014 (UTC)


 * Note to Admin - The sanbox has been moved into draft space as Draft:Trisotech. -- Whpq (talk) 02:24, 28 July 2014 (UTC)


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