Wikipedia:Peer review/1986 Pacific hurricane season/archive1

1986 Pacific hurricane season
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to get this article to GA status. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  16:33, 10 December 2011 (UTC)

The Rambling Man (talk) 11:48, 15 December 2011 (UTC) Wow, thanks for bothering to return.... The Rambling Man (talk) 18:38, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Comments
 * Lead is quite brief, per WP:LEAD.
 * Not really IMO. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * You "opinion" is interesting but not relevant to WP:LEAD. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:39, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * "producing $2 million damage and 2 " -> "causing $2 million damage and two deaths"
 * Good idea. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * "They were four notable storms this year." grammar fail.
 * ✅. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * "most notably Estelle.[3][1]" refs in the right order please.
 * ✅. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Agatha - "One-E becomes " became.
 * Yeah, my grammar sucks wind. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Agatha - too many sentences beginning "Agatha..." more variety for elegant writing please.
 * Ok, done. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Celia - same comment. In general, use some other terms, e.g. "the hurricane" when it's obvious you're talking about Celia etc.
 * Sure. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Darby - "40 mph (60 mph)." hmm?
 * Another very stupid error by me, ugh. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Darby - "began to a weakening trend" I don't understand this.
 * Removed "two". YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Estelle - " veered to west" -> to the west.
 * ✅. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Estelle - "two drowning" +s.
 * Good call. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Frank - "1800 UTC July 23" on July 23.
 * No. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Frank - AOR is a dab link.
 * Fixed. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Georgette - "23-45 mph (37-75 km/h)" en-dash required for both these ranges.
 * I think end-ashes are already in here, correct me if I am wrong. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Georgette - "it's peak intensity as Typhoon Georgette. [3][1]" (a) "its peak", (b) remove the space before the refs, (c) order refs numerically.
 * Done all three. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  21:50, 30 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Isis v Javier - any reason why one is Imperial (metric) and the other metric (Imperial)?
 * Fixed. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:35, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Javier - "Javier had weaken directly" +ed
 * ✅. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:35, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Javier - "Javier weaken into a depression" +ed
 * ✅. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:35, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Javier - "a dangerous hazard" hazards are dangerous so you don't need to say dangerous.
 * ✅. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:35, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Javier - "collided with an" I think you mean coincided?
 * Yea. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:35, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Newton - "minimal pressure" minimum?
 * Yea. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:35, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Newton - "20,000 customers" customers?!
 * Yea. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:35, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Paine - "flooding from Paine worsened flooding issues; the flooding" flooding x 3 is repetitive.
 * "the final advisory was issued.[1][26][3]" ref order.
 * "was issued.[26][3]" ditto.
 * "600 UTC" -> 0600 UTC
 * Fixed. YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * UTC is overlinked in the other storms section.
 * Fixed. YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * Why is just Paine and Roslyn linked in the other storms section?
 * Because they are relevant in that section. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:35, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Don't mix date formats in the refs.
 * I don't at brief glance, but I list years when no date is applicable. YE  Pacific   Hurricane
 * Compare ref 24 with ref 25. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:41, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Good call, thanks. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:51, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Newspaper refs should have page numbers were applicable.
 * Not needed IMO. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:35, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Needed. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:41, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Fine, added for online newspaper links. I'm screwed with the rest since their archives have gone offline and are no longer avialbe ot google AFAIK. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  20:07, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Ensure spaced hyphens and page ranges use an en-dash instead.
 * Everything looks correct, but I'm not good with stuff like that. YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:35, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Tool is showing a couple of bad links.
 * Thanks for the replies and comments :P YE  Pacific   Hurricane  18:51, 8 June 2012 (UTC)