Wikipedia:Peer review/20–20–20 club/archive1

20–20–20 club
This peer review discussion has been closed. I believe this page could be on its way to becoming a featured list. But first, I would like to get a peer review to give me feedback on what, if anything, needs to be tweaked/fixed about this list.

Thanks, Bloom6132 (talk) 17:11, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Comments
 * "club, reaching the milestone in 2007." image caption, I'd say ", both reaching..."
 * —Bloom6132 (talk) 19:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)


 * "was the first to join the club" probably better to say "was the first to achieve this"...
 * —Bloom6132 (talk) 19:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)


 * "Of these, 5 were left-handed batters, 1 was right-handed and 1 was " five, one, one...
 * —Bloom6132 (talk) 19:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)


 * "Brett and Rollins collected more than 200 hits alongside achieving 20–20–20." ref?
 * —Bloom6132 (talk) 15:14, 23 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Last sentence of third para is unreferenced.
 * Added sources, but I'm not too sure whether or not these are self-explanatory. —Bloom6132 (talk) 21:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)


 * If this publication is so major, why not name it? (Baseball Digest)
 * —Bloom6132 (talk) 19:20, 22 June 2012 (UTC)


 * You should probably mention the 20-20-20-20 club in the lead as it should summarise the article.
 * —Bloom6132 (talk) 09:50, 24 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Don't overlink in the lead (e.g. home run, doubles etc are linked multiple times).
 * —Bloom6132 (talk) 19:42, 22 June 2012 (UTC)


 * "Willie Mays reached both the 20–20–20 club and the 30–30 club " this caption needs reference and some explanation needs to be provided as to what a 30-30 is.
 * Explanation provided in the form of a footnote. Source is again Baseball Reference (BR). —Bloom6132 (talk) 07:51, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

The Rambling Man (talk) 10:36, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your feedback. Much appreciated! —Bloom6132 (talk) 20:17, 22 June 2012 (UTC)