Wikipedia:Peer review/2012 Chicago Bears season/archive1

2012 Chicago Bears season
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I've been considering sending this page to GAN, and since I don't really want to screw up my first GAN, I think a peer review can help me out a lot more than a GAN.

Thanks,  Zappa  O  Mati   02:46, 4 May 2013 (UTC)

Ok, I'll try to review this. I know nothing about American football, but I'll try my best. Lead is fine. Offseason: Organizational changes has one-line paragraphs. Try merging them. In 2012 draft class, the first line goes on about 2011. I'll remove it. Points 3 and 4 of the individual season records need refs. The third point of the career records also needs one. I'll continue later, because the computer is a bit slow. Sorry, Darrman (talk) 12:37, 25 May 2013 (UTC)