Wikipedia:Peer review/2014 Philadelphia Phillies season/archive1

2014 Philadelphia Phillies season
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because it is admittedly a behemoth, and I am looking for comments on how it can be more concise, where there is jargon not accessible to a non-baseball fan – ultimately, I would like this to be a GA or even FA at some point, but I have been so invested in this article since the beginning of the season, and need some outside input.

Thanks,  Go  Phightins  !  18:51, 7 December 2014 (UTC)