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21st Century Breakdown
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to promote it to FA status, but since I don't have much article editing experience I do not know what exactly needs to be done to it for it to be promoted. 21st Century Breakdown is a well-known (perhaps worldwide) album by Green Day so it's notable enough to qualify for FA status.

Thanks, Addihockey11 (talk) 02:20, 3 November 2010 (UTC)

Note to nominator: You are not an active editor on this article. You say you'd "like to promote it FA status"; but you have not, as far as I can see, discussed this possibility with the article's main editor, User:IllaZilla, who has more than 300 edits to the article, the most recent on 9 November. You are brand new to Wikipedia (9 edits in total); I think that you could use a bit more experience of editing before trying to steer an article through FA. If you would like to work on this article and help bring it to FA quality, I suggest that you post a message on the article's talkpage, offering your services as a helper to this end, and see what transpires. Brianboulton (talk) 00:53, 12 November 2010 (UTC)

Finetooth comments: I agree with 's comments above. As far as the article goes, I don't see much to complain about, although I don't know enough to say whether it's comprehensive or not. Here are a very few suggestions for improvement.


 * Citation 2 is incomplete.


 * The link checker at the top of this review page finds four dead urls in the citations.


 * Citations 71, 75, 80, 82, 89, and apparently 101 and 104 are incomplete.


 * The date formatting in citations 101 and 102 are nonconforming; that is, they do not use the same formatting as the other citations.


 * I fixed a very few minor prose and style problems.


 * The image licenses look fine to me.

I hope these suggestions prove helpful. If so, please consider reviewing another article, especially one from the PR backlog at WP:PR; that is where I found this one. I don't usually watch the PR archives or check corrections or changes. If my comments are unclear, please ping me on my talk page. Finetooth (talk) 03:35, 21 November 2010 (UTC)