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30 Rock (season 1)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because it is a new article and I would like some feedback on the work I have put into it. If feedback is positive, I plan to submit it for FLC.

I would prefare NOT to have an automated review please.

Thanks, Jamie jca (talk) 01:14, 26 March 2008 (UTC)


 * It looks good, but it needs to be checked for grammatical errors. I found a few.  The ratings section goes into too much detail.  I recommend that you only cover the premiere, finale, low, high (if different from premiere), timeslot change and average.  Also, edit the references' titles, i.e. not all caps.  – thedemonhog   talk  •  edits  03:33, 26 March 2008 (UTC)
 * ✅ -- Jamie jca (talk) 19:33, 26 March 2008 (UTC)