Wikipedia:Peer review/ANGI Homeservices/archive1

ANGI Homeservices
This is an article on a company, and a lot of effort is being made to keep it neutral. However, some people think it reads like an ad, while others think it is too hostile to the company. It has not yet turned into an edit war, and I don't want it to; hence the request for review. I realize peer revew is generally for articles that are higher-quality than this one; but be brutal. I want to know exactly where the article needs improvement. Which sentences are not NPOV; where is the language awkward; where are sources lacking; what sources are poor quality; I want to know everything. How can this article be improved? ~  ONUnicorn (Talk problem solving 17:24, 30 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 23:44, 30 January 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the automated suggestions. I'm really looking to get more human eyes on this article.  I have taken care of a few of your automated suggestions and responded specifically to some others.  I would suggest human reviewers look at my responses to the automated suggestions. ~  ONUnicorn (Talk problem solving 15:20, 31 January 2007 (UTC)