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A Declaration of the Independence of Cyberspace
This article is shorter than I would like and the WP:LEAD is only one paragraph. But, I am looking for feedback as to how I should expand this, what is really lacking, and (of course) the copyediting that usually needs done. Your thoughts? JRP 02:27, 11 February 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 21:52, 12 February 2007 (UTC)
 * A note: WP:LEAD states that notable criticisms can and should be briefly discussed in the lead, so that's one possibility to expand the lead. However, given the length of the article, the lead is of adequate size. APR t 21:55, 12 February 2007 (UTC)