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Adobe Systems

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 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for May 2008.

This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I think it needs general review.

Thanks, Kozuch (talk) 12:21, 13 May 2008 (UTC)

That'll do, right now this'll struggle for GA. Good luck! The Rambling Man (talk) 17:41, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Comments from
 * Four short paras in the lead need work - check out WP:LEAD.
 * Images should be sized per WP:MOS and captions, if fragments, shouldn't have periods.
 * "In a classic failure to predict..." - POV.
 * "but a poorly produced version for Windows." - POV.
 * Company events section should be prose, not list.
 * And headings should meet WP:HEAD.
 * And four citations for the "events" is wholly inadequate.
 * Corporate leadership needs work, seems mostly trivial.
 * Products should be prose and adequately summarise all apps made by Adobe, not just a tiny list.
 * Financial info section is dull. It needs to be made into prose (in my opinion) and needs discussion rather than just bare tables of raw figures.
 * 20 citations in total? And many from Adobe themselves?  Not good enough.