Wikipedia:Peer review/Ahn Eak-tai/archive1

Ahn Eak-tai
Possible areas of peer review:

(Wikimachine 03:25, 30 November 2006 (UTC))
 * Fluent flow of prose, and smooth transition between paragraphs and topics.
 * Additional references, checking factual reliability
 * Checking for correct spelling in foreign phrases translated to English, and possible redirects for those phrases. (i.e. Kunitachi Music School)
 * Clarification of details, pointing out blurry areas
 * Better organization of the sections
 * Are the reference & notes done correctly?


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 22:32, 30 November 2006 (UTC)