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Akeelah and the Bee
I've listed this article for peer review because I want to nominate it to FA some time in the future. As I'm not a native, however, I feel my prose flow is not always the best and as much as clearer as it could be. I've already requested a copyedit on the Guild of Copy Editors and it was done by in July–August 2014. After in November 2014 a GA review was done by and his suggestions helped me to improve it again. Nonetheless, I've added much more content since then and tried to copyedit it by myself. However, as I said, I'm not too confident on my writing skills. So my main request would be a scrutiny on the prose but of course every commentary on other aspects of the article is welcome.

Thanks, Gabriel Yuji (talk) 03:23, 19 May 2016 (UTC)