Wikipedia:Peer review/Akron, Ohio/archive1

Akron, Ohio
Just tell me how to make Akron a better article. Chipka 18:17, 22 May 2006 (UTC)


 * The lead of this article may be too long, or may contain too many paragraphs. Please follow guidelines at WP:LEAD; be aware that the lead should adequately summarize the article.


 * This article is a bit list-weighty; in other words, some of the lists should be converted to prose (paragraph form).


 * There are a few sections that are too short and that should be either expanded or merged.


 * Per WP:MOS, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading  ==Magellan's journey== , use  ==Journey== .
 * Thanks, AndyZ t 19:33, 22 May 2006 (UTC)