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Alû
There's not a whole lot of information on this subject. All but one source I found was from the nineteenth century. Does anyone have any idea how I can improve this article? --Scottandrewhutchins 19:17, 23 September 2006 (UTC)


 * Who is this Pamela Allardice, and why should I trust what she has to say on the subject?
 * The article could do with a picture (a drawing or painting, obviously), given the grotesque description of the monster given, it's only natural that one would want to actually see it.

Those are my first impressions. Lankiveil 10:05, 24 September 2006 (UTC).
 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 03:34, 15 October 2006 (UTC)