Wikipedia:Peer review/Alpha Phi Alpha/archive1

Alpha Phi Alpha
This year (2006) is the centennial celebration for this organization. I would like to see this article as a Featured Article to bring attention to the organzation's 100 year history, and the events that have and will unfold leading up to anniversary date of December 4, 2006. Ccson 14:23, 29 March 2006 (UTC)

For featured status, this article has quite a while to go. Several things to clear up: Thanks, AndyZ t 00:13, 30 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Please expand the lead, as per WP:LEAD. The lead paragraphs are horribly skimpy; please make them an overview of the article as per WP:WIAFA.
 * There aren't enough notes (1 is far from sufficient). The existing note should have WP:CITE information, perhaps using Cite web. Please convert the other external links in the article into footnotes or add them to the external links section.
 * The entire article requires much more expansion. The history section is weak especially.
 * Please prosify the 2006 celebration list.
 * Convert "Notable Alphas" to a See also section instead.


 * The only image Image:MLK memorial.jpg in the article is subject to deletion, apparently. I also second the need for wider references to be found. -  brenneman  {L}  23:08, 30 March 2006 (UTC)
 * You know, this article has potential. Focus more on history, etc. and make the topic seem important. For example, I'd assume a lot of controversy surrounded this fraternity in the beginning. Correct me if I'm wrong... -Osbus 03:41, 31 March 2006 (UTC)