Wikipedia:Peer review/Anna F./archive1

Anna F.
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to make this article a good article, and I would appreciate your feedback on what you think would be good steps for this article to get that status.

Thanks, Lucky102 (talk) 22:38, 26 June 2017 (UTC)

Comments from Hmlarson
 * in lead/intro
 * Can you add that she won the "Pop" category at the Amadeus Austrian Music Awards 2009?
 * 2009–2011
 * Change published to "released"
 * under 2001–-present section
 * add reference for first sentence. Can this sentence be expounded upon so it's not a 1-sentence paragraph? Perhaps describing a little more about the role, film, or reception of her performance?
 * add "Her second studio album" (or similar) before "King in the Mirror was released in ... Anything you can add about this album to flesh out a little?

That's it for now. I'll take another look later + run a few checks. Let me know if you have any questions. Thank you. Hmlarson (talk) 00:55, 10 August 2017 (UTC)