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Anthony Stokes (footballer)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I want an outside perspective on how it can be improved.

Thanks,  Sunder  land  06   19:29, 22 March 2008 (UTC)

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That should help! The Rambling Man (talk) 19:50, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Expand the lead per WP:LEAD.
 * Done Football (soccer) has now become Association football so when you get the chance, prevent the redirect.
 * Done Use en-dash for scorelines per WP:DASH
 * Add some information on his life before professional football.
 * Done Place citations immediately after punctuation where possible per WP:CITE.
 * Changed to, "their Fife rivals" "their bitter Fife rivals" - POV.
 * Done Merge short paragraphs - two sentences don't really make a para.
 * Remove the trivia section - flow the details into the main prose.
 * Done Ensure all dates are formatted per WP:DATE (so avoid things like 1st..)
 * Expand the references to include the  parameter.
 * Done Be consistent in the way you reference the BBC, you've got four different ways of doing it right now.