Wikipedia:Peer review/Arab Agricultural Revolution/archive2

Arab Agricultural Revolution
I've listed this article for peer review because since it has attained GA status there has been a discussion about its title and focus. We have reached consensus that the article is about the historical events, not just the famous 1974 paper by Watson. I have accordingly extended the article to focus more on the historical events, less on Watson's paper and the subsequent academic arguments. The original GA reviewer has suggested PR "primarily to ascertain that the prose is clear to a person without previous knowledge of this topic."
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Thanks, Chiswick Chap (talk) 16:45, 10 February 2018 (UTC)