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Archimedes
Archimedes is currently rated as a good article, but could become a featured article. Please leave any comments here.--Ianmacm 08:56, 20 June 2007 (UTC)
 * Most of the references are in the form of a link. Could these be replaced by citation templates so they are in proper reference format? (C.f. Citation templates.) Otherwise that'll be raised as an objection during your FAC. Thanks. &mdash; RJH (talk) 15:21, 23 July 2007 (UTC)


 * OK, I'll look into this. --Ianmacm 15:43, 23 July 2007 (UTC)


 * Done. --Ianmacm 21:30, 24 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Thank you. &mdash; RJH (talk) 20:26, 30 July 2007 (UTC)

The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question. You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan 14:30, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -  between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 100 feet, use 100 feet, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 100&amp;nbsp;feet.[?]
 * Per Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called  ==The Biography== , it should be changed to  ==Biography== .[?]
 * Per Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading  ==Magellan's journey== , use  ==Journey== .[?]
 * As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2][?]
 * Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]