Wikipedia:Peer review/Armenian Genocide/archive2

Armenian Genocide
This peer review discussion has been closed. I would like to hear your recommendations on what can be added to the article and what should be removed to make it as concise as possible. I doubt anyone can make this article a GA or an FA, however, I'd like to improve the article towards the 100th anniversary of the Armenian Genocide in 2015.
 * Previous peer review

Thanks, Ե րևանցի  talk  04:54, 23 July 2013 (UTC)